Ode(alt version) | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

marsh salmon Jul 6, 2025, 9:55 PM

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I have two versions of this poem, I think I like the alt version better.

Just a little poem I was working on

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Dvf_f11kCoSZPH0PIwu0K6wGuNofTs9WbQB1l99soVY/edit?usp=drivesdk

Google Docs

Ode(alt version)

Elastic balloons distend to fit, mechanically destroyed sponges drowning in a desolate sea of acidic melancholy An assassin by trade, its amorphous walls expand silently, hushing the cries of sustenance to waste. Your sweetened-crystalline gears spiral...

twin cosmosBOT Jul 6, 2025, 9:55 PM

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balmy stump Jul 6, 2025, 10:54 PM

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( @marsh salmon i read it like u asked)

marsh salmon Jul 6, 2025, 10:58 PM

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balmy stump ( <@456226577798135808> i read it like u asked)

did you like it

#Ode(alt version)