A friend once you were well not anymore | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

tribal orbitBOT Jul 5, 2025, 10:03 AM

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polar anvil Jul 5, 2025, 11:09 AM

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omg it's so good i really like the 2nd stanza but the 4th and especially the 5th really killed me i love how you ended the poem sm!!!

tribal orbitBOT Jul 5, 2025, 11:09 AM

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steel geyser Jul 5, 2025, 11:25 AM

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polar anvil omg it's so good i really like the 2nd stanza but the 4th and especially the 5th...

thank you so muchhh

brave wave Jul 5, 2025, 1:32 PM

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I liked reading the first 3 stanzas, and the context you depicted kinda happened to me as well
Nice poem overall

slim frigate Jul 5, 2025, 1:35 PM

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the worst part of this poem is that it ends. Great one.

If this is supoosed to depict a real life happening, you've nailed it. It's composed, it's clear.

steel geyser Jul 5, 2025, 3:18 PM

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brave wave I liked reading the first 3 stanzas, and the context you depicted kinda happened...

thank you so muchhh

steel geyser Jul 5, 2025, 3:18 PM

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slim frigate the worst part of this poem is that it ends. Great one. If this is supoosed to ...

I'm glad you enjoyed it thank you really

brave wave Jul 5, 2025, 4:03 PM

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steel geyser thank you so muchhh

Welcome!

vague pendant Jul 5, 2025, 4:11 PM

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I really like the message and sorry about your loss 😕

steel geyser Jul 5, 2025, 10:03 PM

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thank youuu and don't be it all happens in life I hope the best for her

dapper lionBOT Jul 5, 2025, 10:03 PM

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*thank youuu and don't be

it all happens in life I

hope the best for her*

steel geyser Jul 6, 2025, 1:35 PM

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@polar anvil I wasn't kidding about the warning hehe..

polar anvil Jul 6, 2025, 1:36 PM

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halu again

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oh wait I've read this one before

steel geyser Jul 6, 2025, 1:37 PM

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ouh.. dies of embarrassment

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nothing happened hehe

polar anvil Jul 6, 2025, 1:38 PM

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lol it's alrightt

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still a lovely poem

steel geyser Jul 6, 2025, 1:39 PM

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you're too kind haha thanks

steel geyser Jul 6, 2025, 3:16 PM

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@devout pecan

steel geyser Jul 6, 2025, 3:44 PM

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@edgy otter

upbeat nexus Jul 7, 2025, 11:01 PM

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Relatable

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Im at school rn

steel geyser Jul 8, 2025, 6:26 AM

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upbeat nexus Im at school rn

ooo that was 4am for me woah-

steel geyser Jul 11, 2025, 4:20 AM

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@cyan kindle

tribal orbitBOT Jul 11, 2025, 6:59 AM

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steel geyser Jul 12, 2025, 4:45 PM

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@slim frigate

steel geyser Jul 13, 2025, 10:57 AM

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@cedar compass

cyan kindle Jul 14, 2025, 2:53 AM

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Another good poem. It's more sorrowful than the others, the topic of a friend changing and casting you away hits hard. I like the rhyming pattern. I honestly don't have a lot to say about this one, sorry.

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-# also sorry for saying that I'd do two a day then that very day not doing two.

#A friend once you were well not anymore