it's okay to be different, weird too(I call it unique)

[amber fern]

@clever saffron has sent a notification! - @viscid radish @heavy canyon @junior garnet @glossy girder @dense summit @dusky locust @solid jackal @hallow sierra @plain roost

[clever saffron]

@novel tulip u gave me the inspo to write this, also I wanted to say sorry for sounding mean if I diddd I'm genuinely sorry

[clever saffron]

@jade zenith

[jade zenith]

Amazing

👏

[clever saffron]

thanksss

[junior garnet]

i felt this poem.well done

[clever saffron]

thank you so muchhh

[plain roost]

i woke up dis morning, showered, then logged onto discord to see about 4 poem notifications provenient from the AOP discord

[clever saffron]

AOP? and sorry for blowing up your phone if I did hehe..

@small jay

[novel tulip]

It felt like you did speak to my inner child

plus i'm glad i gave you inspiration ^w^

[novel tulip]

dw, i just laugh at my sittuation but i have to be the one to say i am going to get through the week

[clever saffron]

I must be thanking you mister hehe but thanks for that tooo

[clever saffron]

you shouldn't laugh at ittt and I am seriously sorry if I did sound meannnn not joking at all and you should talk to someone about it and I still say you should take better care of your healthhh

make yourself the priority mister

[clever saffron]

@small jay

[small jay]

thank u for the advice maam

ur poems have maternal instinct

i rlly like em

[clever saffron]

what's that..

[clever saffron]

I'm very happy you do hehehe

[small jay]

like a mother's personality

uhh how to describe it

something similar to nurturing

and care

[clever saffron]

ouhh I've been told that so many times haha

like yk that mom friend

[small jay]

ah yess

[clever saffron]

@crisp acorn

[clever saffron]

@light ledge

[clever saffron]

@atomic tide I read ur bio and hehe..

feedback please

[atomic tide]

Wow. That's a warm hug in writing... I really love this. It's mostly well written, but the flow is off in a place or two. Like the line "To not know what'll happen, the unknown" I kept reading it as "in the unknown" but that might just be me. Also the line "We don't have to but we have to learn how to move on" felt longer than the other lines and felt off beat, so maybe tighten the second half? That's all I have. I really really liked this. It's sad but comforting. Like it's raining outside and there's a leak, but at least you've got someone beside you.

[clever saffron]

awh thank youu and yeah will improve next timeee

[atomic tide]

Of course. I will glady read your work.

[clever saffron]

then is it fine if I tag u in some other poems.. (might be a few or more)

[atomic tide]

Yes, very much.

[clever saffron]

whaaaa thank youuu so much really

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@cobalt portal

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@maiden trout

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@knotty jacinth

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@dim kelp

[dim kelp]

uhh hello there

[clever saffron]

hi hiii.. so I saw ur amazing feedback with criticism sooo.. feedback..?

[dim kelp]

trade?

[clever saffron]

yeshh but I got a better idea ping me in as many poems of yours and I'll read though I might not be able to give all feedback immediately and you do the same for me and I don't mind if it takes a few days as long as it's not so long I turn 40.. what do you think?

🙃

[amber fern]

@clever saffron is now following @dim kelp.

[dim kelp]

can't promise to go through all of them, you know. but let's see.

[clever saffron]

no problem but thanksss