Letter Of Fatigue | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

zenith pollen Jul 4, 2025, 2:07 AM

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I love the sprawl of a line

"But those days don't outweigh the days where I feel like i'm nothing to become"

That then leads into a quatrain that is thrown at you in short bursts

"I've competed and failed
Every move confuses me like a cold trail
Yet I don't cry and I don't wail
I refuse to be perceived as frail"

Also, "grind and grit" is quite the fun phrase. Good job!

idle sparrow Jul 4, 2025, 2:11 AM

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Thank you very much! i just wanted to touch on all the areas of hatred i have for the hobby

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as for grind and grit, you should've seen what was there before..

zenith pollen Jul 4, 2025, 2:12 AM

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I trust you chose the better phrase.

Hopefully you can rediscover the joy in whatever hobby this is referring to

opal summitBOT Jul 4, 2025, 2:13 AM

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Wonderful! @zenith pollen has just progressed to level 1!

idle sparrow Jul 4, 2025, 2:13 AM

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trust me, i've been doing it for a year and i've been feeling it before then

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i just told myself to stop being so critical and not give up when things get muddy

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things aren't muddy now and it feels like a chore to be there

idle sparrow Jul 4, 2025, 3:19 AM

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@sharp zephyr

sharp zephyr Jul 4, 2025, 5:45 PM

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🫶 this a nice way to tell a story of someone who's to tired to change

burnt cometBOT Jul 4, 2025, 5:45 PM

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*🫶 this a nice way to

tell a story of someone

who's to tired to change*

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