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#Life's worth living
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patent marlin
Beautiful poem✨
bitter wolf
no wonder bro was asleep for a week
she was cooking up this masterpiece
pure urchin
no wonder bro was asleep for a week
she was cooking up this masterpiece
ty but I was js worried abt my exams 🥲
slim jackal
such a beautiful poem. loved it. change last line tho
pure urchin
such a beautiful poem. loved it. change last line tho
thanks and did.. how abt now
hazy olive
its so pretty i love it!
pure urchin
its so pretty i love it!
I'm glad thank youuu
slim jackal
thanks and did.. how abt now
yeh that's better
pure urchin
@bright zephyr
bright zephyr
I love it, the way you capture the beauty of life, instead of criticizing it (like me...) and the hope of a better tomorrow, the beauty in the night
Gosh
Loved it
pure urchin
Loved it
thank you so muchhh and this poem shows LIFE ISSSS WORTH LIVING bc there is beauty of life and so glad you like ittt
bright zephyr
:D
pure urchin
@craggy knot
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@fading rock
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@vapid grail
fading rock
The rhymes 🫰🫰🫰
pure urchin
thanksss
pure urchin
@steel compass
old nymph
loved the message!
steel compass
More amazing imagery. I love the lines
"Taking shy peeks, so cute
Life's so majestic, why miss out on this beaut?"
The beat's good and I like the rhymes. As with the others only one thing, "I see homes that have that smell-The smell of fresh welcoming meals made,"
Should those be two lines, or was that intentional?
pure urchin
More amazing imagery. I love the lines
"Taking shy peeks, so cute
Life's so maj...
oh yhhhh it should be two lines thank you for telling me
pure urchin
loved the message!
thank you so muchhh
old nymph
thank you so muchhh
read my poem 😡
pure urchin
no excuses
whaaaaa strict sir I see well sir how'd you like it when someone tells u to read a poem at 4.39 am
pure urchin
yes...
thennn ima save for later hehe I need to focus while reading to write feedbacks
old nymph
i ignore them 😂
pure urchin
🙂
old nymph
thennn ima save for later hehe I need to focus while reading to write feedbacks
i was kdding like read at ur convenience
pure urchin
i ignore them 😂
well at least I'm generous enough not to haha
pure urchin
i was kdding like read at ur convenience
joking here too lolz looking forward to reading it btwww
old nymph
well at least I'm *generous* enough not to haha
yeah lol
pure urchin
lolz don't mention ittt
tough wren
it's so beautifully written ! my favorite parts are-
"The sky still ocean blue,
The moon hiding in the clouds, I see it too.
Taking shy peeks, how cute,
Life's so majestic, why miss out on this beaut?"
it's such a pretty vibe!
and,
"This is what I live for-
A silent promise in a world so cruel,
All the lovely memories, I store,
Life isn't forever a duel."
this hitted me! I like how you kept it pretty simple and yet captured the little joys in life so beautifully. keep going!
pure urchin
it's so beautifully written ! my favorite parts are-
"The sky still ocean blue,...
jazakallah khairrr also could you also check #1387396809210593371 and give some feedback..?
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pure urchin
@silent locust I read what u said abt my poem and thank youu do you think you could leave feedback..? just your thoughts on how I could improve my poems or just what you think
also you can tag me in your poems I wouldn't mind
@idle prairie
@worn dust sorry for tagging so much
silent locust
<@456226577798135808> I read what u said abt my poem and thank youu do you think...
I love everything about this msg
You can tag me more
pure urchin
You can tag me more
awh thank you so muchhh and I will but it might be a lot so u read them whenever u can
pure urchin
@dreamy shore
dreamy shore
I love your energy?!!
pure urchin
I love your energy?!!
awhhh thank youu 💗