The Dreams of the Jazz Player and the Mermaid

[storm coral]

@muted wren finally finished it

[storm coral]

what you think?

[muted wren]

My fault was typing out and got distracted

I got u rn

Ight I read it 😭 it's beautiful I love the way u describe this beautiful woman and ur use of comparing music to a food for love is smart asf, like I can envision it (lowk that line inspired me)

I love this use of music realting to different aspects though shi good asf 🫶

[storm coral]

it's actually a shakespeare line reimagined lol. i didnt make it

[storm coral]

i wanted it to be jazzy, dreamy, and a literary goldmine

the song is kinda like that though

you feel all those things especially when you have a vivid imagination

ill even make a moodboard for this poem but i guess the poem should be able to do that for the reader.. right?

[muted wren]

🙏 ayu u pmo bro

[storm coral]

LMFAOOOO

[muted wren]

What'd moodboard?

[muted wren]

Jazzy, is just the word i needed 😭 it literally describes u perfectly, ur a jazzy kinda guy

[storm coral]

like a collection of photos, quotes, or newspapers, music, or any sort of media that describes this thing you're talking about

[slender cloud]

Wonderful! @storm coral has just progressed to level 6!

[storm coral]

thanks vro😭

[muted wren]

Ohh shi, 😭 u deadahh just teaching me all this writing stuff

[storm coral]

that's the best part about all this ig

[muted wren]

Fax im learning alot especially from that poetry reading call I joined they where really inciteful and I noticed that I got a long way to go 😭

[storm coral]

i didnt get to join, what did they say?

[muted wren]

They where reading people poetry, I heard some really good ones and they would break them down after. It was interesting ima try to be in vc more, i liked a poem i read aswell, that ain't get much recognition if u wanna see it

[storm coral]

that's cool! and plus, i'd like to see