#hope always stays

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patent cobaltBOT
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@raven heron has sent a notification! - @earnest inlet @hot finch @fair rain @pastel thistle @hushed summit @ivory spire

raven heron
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@frail perch @proven cradle @thick kettle @lime glen

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@harsh pond

ivory spire
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aw

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this is

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yk the tone of the poem, the words used, it just matches your topic

gleaming spruceBOT
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*yk the tone of the

poem, the words used, it just

matches your topic*

- death_x_23
ivory spire
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it's so simple and yet so strong

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it's just pure

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and I love it

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thank you for writing such a good poem

raven heron
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awhhhh thank you so muchhh

frail perch
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Loved it

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though I'm a negative ahhh guy

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But it's really good

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From an unknown speaker to "I" shift was good

raven heron
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awhhh thank youuu so glad you both enjoyed it

raven heron
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its an accomplishment

frail perch
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lmfao

grand gulchBOT
frail perch
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I just got slapped by my mom 😭

raven heron
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oof-

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whyyy

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u good??

frail perch
raven heron
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oooooo can't wait to read ittt

frail perch
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She said I'm a selfish and I said idgas

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Bet

raven heron
frail perch
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Tbh u already are

frail perch
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She does everybody's work and gets nothing in return

raven heron
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does it hurt??

grand gulchBOT
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Wonderful! @thick kettle has just progressed to level 19!

frail perch
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Nah I'm fine

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xD

raven heron
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gud gud

raven heron
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understandable

frail perch
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Ye

raven heron
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😭

frail perch
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@thick kettle

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Wanna compete in a poetry competition?

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Like just a duel

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cuz i wanna improve

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Nd u r more experienced than me

raven heron
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OUHHH

frail perch
raven heron
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munches on popcorn

frail perch
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I started like 2 months ago

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And in that time took a break of 3 weeks

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😭

wise veldt
frail perch
wise veldt
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Ooof the first stanza mate

frail perch
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yes

raven heron
frail perch
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anyways, kai wanna do it?

wise veldt
raven heron
wise veldt
frail perch
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Maybe others decide that

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idk

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Ig

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eh

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You decide

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@thick kettle

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We'll go with one poem, you can decide how much time we get

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And theme too

gleaming spruceBOT
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*I just folo rulz

someone else made at this kind

of situations :/*

- kainotgay
frail perch
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3 days?

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or 1?

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Or 1 hour?

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lr

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*alr

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Let's start it tomorrow cuz it's night for me

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Theme?

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What's that 😭

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Ohhh

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Basically real like

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Sad?

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Yes

hushed summit
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woah.
i feel like each 1 of ur poems keep getting better and better
i rlly like this one it feels like smth ud tell ur friend ar 3am while they're having a mental breakdown
the only thing i have to say is in stanza 2 where it says "feel the moons soft hum as the stars come" the rhythm changes in those 2 lines (idk if that ws on purpose or not but its rlly good!)

fair rain
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LOVED this poem. you had me hooked.

raven heron
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THANK YOUUU I APPRECIATE IT GLAD YOU BOTH LIKED IT 💐 heart

harsh pond
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Pretty good bro probably my favorite word of you thus far

patent cobaltBOT
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@harsh pond is now following @raven heron.

raven heron
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@sturdy grotto

hot finch
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Nahhhh nobo I love how your writing style is just comforting and heart warming🥹💗💗💗💗

raven heron
grand gulchBOT
gleaming spruceBOT
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*THANK YOUUU I'M SO GLAD

YOU FELT THAT WAY ABOUT MY

POEMMM MAKES ME HAPPY*

- bdjkcuqvowibq
hot finch
grand gulchBOT
remote sphinx
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feels almost like i saw this at the right time
moments after i finished writing one about hope aswell
''Hold tight to dreams that softly glow''
WHY DID I LIKE THIS LINE SO MUCH-
ABSOLUTE POETRY
HANDS DOWN
i absolutely love this one if im being honest
rhyming feels natural
this is a good poem
i don't know how else to put it im not good at giving feedback

patent cobaltBOT
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@remote sphinx is now following @raven heron.

raven heron
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thank you too ocean healerrrrr

raven heron
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or.. #1375866795449253888 this is inspired by the movie the fault in our stars

raven heron
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@grizzled peak

raven heron
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@vital turret