#𝐍𝐨𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐒𝐚𝐦𝐞 🥀

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We started as strangers,
Ended as friends—
But not in the way
I hoped it would end.

You from the north,
I from the south.
You were my equal—
No worries, no doubt

You weren’t the sweetest,
Not sugar, not salt
Yet Still,
you carved your name deep into my skin.

Love once sweet as honey,
Eyes dark as chocolate
But sadly,
we all must reap what we sow.

I wish we could go back—
Back to the old days,
When we were in sync
Like beating hearts

Your love is no longer mine—
There’s surely not a doubt

Knowing this…

Makes me want to scream,
Or shout,
Or even curse your name
From mountain peaks

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𝐍𝐨𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐒𝐚𝐦𝐞 🥀

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🫠

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The poem is really nice fr

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its beauty is in its simplicity

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the line with north and south ..is so so good

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great work

frail fjord
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Aw
It's really good, I love how you express the emotions in a simple manner and manage to hide them at the same time.

It's wonderful!!!

high pond
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Loved its simplicity

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lovey dovey poem

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👏 👏👏

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DAMNNN I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!🥹💗💗💗💗 It's so melancholy...
The way it's simple yet has good metaphors it almost feels like a confession or regret. .

LOVE THIS MIY!!!

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Or longing the way you wanna go back atleast for once... and feel those moments once again but you know you can't.. you are not delusional in this.. just melancholy🥹💗

high pond
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Indeed.

upbeat plaza
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Thats so deep

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Raw

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“Makes me want scream
Or shout
Or even curse your name
From mountain peaks” DAAAAAMN

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*“Makes me want scream Or

shout Or even curse your name

From mountain peaks” DAAAAAMN*

- besourao
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WHAT WAS THAT?! the whole poem talk about a love that you idealize, but never becomes real

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So cruel and well writen!

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This poem is raw and emotional. It beautifully captures the pain of unfulfilled love , how two people can grow close but still drift apart. The way it moves from sweet memories to heartbreak feels very real. I liked how you compared love to honey and chocolate, then showed how everything faded. The ending hits hard , that urge to scream or shout because it hurts so much. a 9.1 ⭐ .

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☹️

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topaz rain
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IMMA GO CLEAN BUT ILL TTYL

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BAAIAIAIAI

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Okayyy, Cya be good! 😊

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I thought about making it longer last night but that’s as far as I could get with it at the time. But don’t worry luckily for you most of my current poems comes from my emotions & memories of the situation I went through, so I might make one soon!! But my next few poems will be good, I PROMISE🥹

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(thank you for checking it out also!!)

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Yippie! I’ll make sure to ping you in the future ones I plan to make dw!!

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Its an amazing poem its impossible not feel like “OMG”

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*Its an amazing

poem its impossible not

feel like “OMG”*

- besourao
gloomy copper
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I like this and love the message!!!

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restive steeple
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I LOVED THE SHIFT THO

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“Not sugar, not salt
Yet still, you carved your name..."
Thatttt contrast is sharp and memorable.

Its not loud, not begging, itss just soft devastation... it shows love isn’t always sweet, but its lasting...sometimes for eternity..

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and this ending.

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Makes me want to scream,
Or shout,
Or even curse your name
From mountain peaks....

it just hits the spot yk, the first real breath after holding it in for too long...it feels like a page from a diary…read years later, still filled with warmth of beloved

restive steeple
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# restive steeple I DID??? AWW THANK YOUU

OFC YOU DID😊 remember I didn’t rlly know what to write about next, and you gave me a few suggestions? Basically this one & the next few i got coming up is all bc of the suggestions you gave me💖☺️

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ooooo me like, fun rhyming scheme and use of words

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really hearbreaking too dang

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I wish we could go back—
Back to the old days,
When we were in sync
Like beating hearts

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this cream of the crop

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tho i feel the stanzas after this stanza is abit disconnected specifically this one

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Makes me want to scream,
Or shout,
Or even curse your name
From mountain peaks

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*> Makes me want to scream, >

Or shout, > Or even curse your

name > From mountain peaks*

- biennyyyy
wooden ingot
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but theres beauty to the inconsistency of it, and it just painful really conveys that longing and pain of heartbreak

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me gives and pat pat

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WELL PENNED

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