(Series) And The Stars Blinked Twice...

[past mesa]

This is the first series that I have completed, please give me as much feedback as possible, hoping to improve!

[ionic ocean]

I have read the first page and it's good!

May I ask what made you improve your English?

And what app did you use to write such a clean and well organized page ?

[placid folio]

*And what app did you

use to write such a clean and

well organized page ?*

- lanatab_0

[ionic ocean]

@past mesa

[past mesa]

I just typed on my notes, and copy pasted onto word and converted it to pdf...i write research papers so I'm used to organizing pages 😭...I'm a law student..

[weary pulsar]

Wonderful! @past mesa has just progressed to level 2!

[ionic ocean]

Niceee and wow your a law student I bet you will do amazing ideas in the future since you might experience such tough stuff in your job

[past mesa]

If u want an easier way, u can copy paste ur poem into chatgpt and then put mine in it and ask for an identical chapbook

[past mesa]

Bro jinxed it 💀😭

[ionic ocean]

Sorry what does jinx mean?

I am not good at english vocabulary

That's why

🥲

[past mesa]

Basically passing on bad luck, mostly unintentionally

[ionic ocean]

Nooo I didn't mean it that way