#Lost In Doubt

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south geode
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Dear God, I pray and wait and wait
For answers that never seem to come
You don't seem to be there, I'm left to fate
I ask and ask, but still, no peace

For all good, yet there's nothing to share
Why won't you answer my prayers?
I pray for my father's health to repair
But he's taken, without a care

I asked for my mother's struggles to cease
But eviction notices bring only stress
I want my family whole, in good health
But false hope is all that's left to feel

The line between reality and dreams blurs
Maybe you're not real, maybe I'm insane
All I ask is for good health, for love that's true
But all I get is pain, and heartache anew

One last time, I'll pray, I'll plead and I'll cry
Bring health to my family, bless them with wellness high
Don't make me lose hope, in the darkness and strife
Give me strength to carry on, and a heart full of life.

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south geode
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First time writing a religion based poem. Hopefully it's good

earnest scroll
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Great poem, even though I'm agnostic I can really feel your struggle.

south geode
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I am an atheist so I did my best 🥲

earnest scroll
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I meant that in a positive way 💀😭, hes a cool dude but in his mind god is a fact and that makes it hard for him to cope with somethings sometimes

south geode
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Ah

earnest scroll
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It got worse huh? 💀

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Lol mb😅

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Good poem.

south geode
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Thank you

earnest scroll
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Can I send you a poem link in Dm's? It's something i wrote a while back that is super close to the topic of your poem