a daughter of Cain and a poet wow
#Ethel Cain type poem
weary ocean
weary ocean
a daughter of Cain and a poet wow
this poem is really sharp and direct, but i think it could be improved by much vivid imagery. the first stanza's symbolism was brilliant (stained glass as faith, light as the hope for seeing the divine) but the following stanzas grew weak.
last stanza, it didn't need imagery that much. it's actually great that you said it directly to end the poem
btw rip ethel cain