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grim inlet Jun 14, 2025, 12:13 AM

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Started poetry 3 months ago. Would like feedback!

fleet spade Jun 14, 2025, 4:58 AM

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i love that there are a bunch of ideas floating that all chip in to create a huge plot for this indifference to others from the writer, it's lovely! that being said, there's definitely some room for improvement on expansion of the ideas and flow but it's a wonderful and exceptional poem for your short time writing. keep writing!! :)

grim inlet Jun 14, 2025, 4:58 AM

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tysmm

dull bay Jun 14, 2025, 5:59 AM

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One of the best poems I've read, I think. I love the inspirational tone of it!
As the other reply said, definitely keep writing :)

grim inlet Jun 14, 2025, 6:01 AM

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i appreciate it man!!

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tyy

grim inlet Jun 14, 2025, 7:15 AM

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@earnest dove

inner dove Jun 15, 2025, 4:19 AM

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grim inlet

You ain't slip that TYLER AND KENDRICK SHOUT OUT XD

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