#Shadows

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lofty idol
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Every shadow mocks reality.
The truth- warped into two dimensions
and hidden in dark totality.

The shadow is cold, uncomprehension
reaching the sun, an impossibility.
It’s a spot of darkness with no mention.

Shadow, they say an absence of light.
True, but like a shadow is true- delusion.
More than absence, it pulls, it breaks, it fights

Their dark limbs grasp wandering thoughts,
pulling, dragging, into the night.
Bringing men to madness, minds rotting.

Shadows, twisted mirrors of truth and light,
hiding their nature away from eyesight.

mortal ore
lofty idol
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Thank you :)

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@grave isle

grave isle
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It's really great, loved the poem.

lofty idol
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Thanks!

full kayak
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very smooth read the rhythms slot so satisfyingly lol tysm for sharing

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feels kinda like a play on the sonnet format

lofty idol
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Appreciate you actually reviewing lol