Rustling spaces

[eager haven]

-# trying raw writing

[light plover]

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[eager haven]

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[prime wadi]

Ow

Thats

Hit hard

Amazing piece damn…

I love the way you use raw continue with it i love this way to write!! Such a amazing job raeeee

[eager haven]

@terse crown@crystal nymph @urban nacelle@long fiber

[crystal nymph]

:0

Le beri beri sigma

Gib cwz 😋

LE ITZ BERI BERI COOLZE

But da 2nd page pmo ngl

[terse crown]

@eager haven I don't really write any poetry of this sort, I like it though!!

nice poem

[crystal nymph]

Le yer can try mah poem

-# self-promoting shamelessly

Le buzz moi likz it

Da first page da most

In typograph

Anz da third page

For the poetry le

Le buzz the 2nd pagez pmo cauz itz not seamlezz I think likr yer know when yer tv screen has a dead pixel anz it bugz yer

Dat kinda

Le mebz make it seamlezz

Otherwise le gudze poem moi likezz 😋😋😋

3.5 lickz 😋😋😋👅/5

Le alz moi not thinkz diz iz a complete raw writing cauz le clearly there has been some thought put to it

Moi not sayin itz bad, ITZ BERI BERI SIGMA

Le juzz not raw imo

[eager haven]

Im bad at raw💀this was the closest i could get

-# still hid behind the lilies tho

[crystal nymph]

BWAHSHSHAHHAHAA LE DW ITZ BERI SIGMA MOI JUZZ A BORING EDITOR 😭

[blazing umbra]

Interesting themes. The emotions feel different here. There is a questioning of existence. And because of it it gives the piece a closed almost a claustrophobic yet desperate feel. It's well set and articulated to be honest. Good job Rae 💜

[rotund kraken]

beautifully constructed

[eager haven]

@shy gulch

[strange sail]

OMG BRO. THIS HITS HARD. AMAZING BRO DAMN. THIS IS SO RAW AND THE EMOTIONS ARE LIKE A GUT PUNCH FR

I will give you 10 bucket of chicken for that

[eager haven]

YYAYAYAYAYAYA

[sick bough]

very aesthetic! Love the style evolution, it's interesting

[long fiber]

I liked this, the typog reminds me of poética, and the visuals are very interesting

[eager haven]

@lucid delta

[lucid delta]

I was not prepared for such peak typography

[eager haven]

Aw😭thenks

[lucid delta]

It's suffocating piece. Fiery lines of alliteration, consonants that stab and feel like a tether pulling you closer down. It would be such a fun poem to recite

[eager haven]

I actually avoided reciting this poem because it takes TOO MUCH energy😭more than my poem on censorship and stuff

[silver galleon]

This is some goated typography
I like the rhythm of the poem it's not boring to read
Captivating
It almost has a beat to it
It got action to it
Mhm yeah that's what I wanna say