A Draft Walks into a Bar

[stiff kettle]

This is a really unique and interesting concept for a metaphor, very well executed I might add

It's absurd, but I think that's what makes this poem so entertaining. Kinda made me chuckle

I wish I could write poetry somewhat comedic like this

I was immediately drawn in with "the ink was an alcoholic"

There is one line you should probably fix though

[frosty rivet]

Very cool! I might have to try doing something like this some time!

[stiff kettle]

"She flew south when things go serious" is just a minor grammar thing you can fix, unless it was intentional

[stiff kettle]

Same haha. I also kinda feel like writing something like this

[teal umbra]

oh crap yeah ur right... that wasn't intentional 💔 (the t vanished somewhere) ty tho!!

[teal umbra]

u should! its very fun

[frosty rivet]

I did one similar, about Biden once 🥲

[teal umbra]

ooh could u send it 👀

[frosty rivet]

sure should I post it and then just send the link?

[teal umbra]

sure! or js dm me lol im curious

[frosty rivet]

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