These are bottled things even pencil and paper with an eraser aren’t allowed to see

[lapis niche]

I like the temple idea

[hearty basin]

the wow and now rhyme schemes feel forced or rushed

i also think you could've italicized "It's Okay" but the rest of the poem is really nice and well written

and the "I" too

[wild yarrow]

It was raw emotion and how I felt in the moment so I won’t change it for the sake of my heart and feelings. Certain poems I won’t touch unless there grammar errors