An Uninvited Guest (Love)

[gusty crag]

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[gusty crag]

An Uninvited Guest (Love)

@lime flame

[vale shadow]

I will read it later!!!(* >ω<)

[gusty crag]

okie

❤️

[vale shadow]

CHERRY!!!!I LOVE THISSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!💗💗💗💗💗💗💗🫂💙

I love the flow of the poem. Like how it progresses!! Well done cherry!!!💗🫂💙

Broo this poem is so deep!!!!!😭😭 is it like before the author was scared of love? But when it actually finds her it was warm and gentle? But then the love disappeared?

[gusty crag]

genius..but you are half right

the girl is scared of love..but it comes to her at an unexpected time so she is frightened..and sees it as a threat .here she doen't find out that love is actually warm but is still afraid of it since it's the beginning..thats why she sees it as a scary creature..but the last line hints at things getting better in the future..so she will later find out that it wasn't that bad of a thing

@gaunt lily

[vale shadow]

Hehe thank you I'm glad atleast I was half right!!😭

[vale shadow]

Ooooh that was good to know!! Now this makes the poem more interesting now that I understand it!! Hmm really great work cherry!!!💗💗 I'm gald you gave me this explanation!

Thank you!!💗💗💗

[gusty crag]

thank you for reading

[vale shadow]

Nah it was all my pleasure!!

[gusty crag]

@flint fable

[narrow night]

Took the words right outta my mouth😆
The realization that the creature, though terrifying, wasn’t entirely evil. It's a part of her, a signal, a storm that will pass. that while anxiety or fear can be overwhelming, it doesn’t mean total destruction... understanding it is part of the journey just like the last part was hinting at

[gusty crag]

damned genius

🫠

[narrow night]

Anyway to me, it's about learning to recognize your inner battles, and that even the worst feelings aren't forever.....i really like this storyyyyy.... First story about "love" I actually like😆

[gusty crag]

haha thanks..das the biggest compliment ever

the poem itself can have different interpretations

because it is kind of confusing'

[narrow night]

I'm glad... I really enjoyed it from two povs😆

[gusty crag]

someone thought it was a monster eating the girl lol

[narrow night]

It's not surprising😹 if I hadn't finished reading and stopped midway I'd have thought same too😹

[gusty crag]

yeah..does seem like that

i was kinda worried if ppl would get the meaning or not

cause most ppl ignore the last line

[narrow night]

Oh and btw I love your writing style... Its evocative.. Blending vivid imagery with emotional depth in a way that feels both poetic and cinematic... There's a softness in your descriptions too, even when the emotions turn heavy, which gives the entire piece a haunting elegance.

[gusty crag]

thankssssss

[narrow night]

they'd read the comment hopefully😆

[gusty crag]

yeah hopefully

i can ping u in a series if u want

[narrow night]

Lemme follow you rq

[gusty crag]

yayyyy

[hidden gazelle]

@narrow night is now following @gusty crag.

[gusty crag]

lol i pinged u in a poem series...would love to herar yo feedback..plij read when u have time

[regal timber]

Bookmark 🔖 ( I'll read it later )

[gusty crag]

okie

[narrow night]

Aight... I'd check it out now