Its beautifully well written. Though, I thought that the lines are too short, too less of context, too less of actual poetic metaphoric depth, which I suppose is intentional, to keep it mysterious and deep. But sometimes I feel like when Its done too much, It can push readers away, push away interest. And the ending can be worked upon as well. Still as lovely as ever though.
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Its beautifully well written. Though, I thought that the lines are too short, to...
I understand, thank you so much for your feedback!!
I was skeptical about the ending too, let me see what I can do about it :)