Choreographed Love

[lusty lark]

dude thats so sick bro

like awsome

[gilded lichen]

Tysm bro
It was sponsored by an argument between my gf and I😆

[fathom gorge]

Damn broo!!!! I loved this line so much "whats the point of flowers if they bloom on command but never carry the scent of longing?" And the last stanza!! I really loved they way you conveyed it all!! The emotions can legit be felt from this!!!! It feels like the writer got to know that love can be like "desires without duty"(your line which I loved alot) and now cuz of that they are puzzled and confused. They are Questionaing the vary existence of that love. They are like can love really be like that? If so is it love? An obligation? Not an affection? The writer's concept of love is different, and thats why at the end they end its better have no love at all that receive that obligation typa love.

That all was just how I understood it.

Really love it!!!

[gilded lichen]

Woahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! Yes yes you took the words right outta my mouth
You really got it😭.... Everything you said was exactly what went through my mind then😆

Tysm for your feedback..... Made me smile lol

[fathom gorge]

Wait really I'm glad I was able to guess it but I guess its just means that you conveyed your emotions really well in this poem that ppl were able to feel it!! Really loved it!!

[fathom gorge]

Im happy that I made you smile!!and no problem!! You did a really great job!!(´▽｀)

[gilded lichen]

I'm so glad you did... Another reason to to give up writing lol

[cloud shard]

*I'm so glad you did...

Another reason to to

give up writing lol*

- 1steternalmaster

[fathom gorge]

Of course how could I not feel it when you wrote it so well!!💗💗💗 and how its another reason to give up writing?? Pls don't!! Keep it up! I loved your work and I would love to see more in the future too!!!

Yk lets follow each other so we can see each others future work too!!

[unique wind]

@fathom gorge is now following @gilded lichen.

@gilded lichen is now following @fathom gorge.

[gilded lichen]

Just did😆

[gilded lichen]

Well since everyone is posting mine usually gets overshadowed lol and this is was actually the reason why I picked it up again (gave up once prior to this😆)

Anyway thanks again

[fathom gorge]

Yesss~

[fathom gorge]

I guess you just didnt tahged anyone thats why. If you will tag ppl they will actually know and see your work otherwise you are right it all gets overshadowed!! And nah pls dont give it up again!!!

I really loved your poetry so much cuz it was my typa vibe~ others use alot of metaphors, strict rhyming schemes, and structure and all and due to this sometimes it becomes too complex and the emotional depth is lost. But unlike that I loved how emotional it was. Like with each word you wrote there were meanings and emotions behind and the reader could feel it all. I loved it

[gilded lichen]

This!!!! You're so right lol they forget the emotion running behind what they write in the name of proper structure and rhymes or rhythm..... Honestly I'm glad we came across eachother... I can now give my read a good read😆

And I won't up thanks hehe

[fathom gorge]

Lmao same here!! I just really love like finally someone with the same opinion!!!!!!! According to me poetry without emotions is nothing but just empty words!!!

Lmao we be talking in two place turn by turn😭 like we are chatting in your poem section and my poem section both lol

I tagged you under one of my poem (i have only posted 2 lol) check it out I hope you likes it. And give me a review cuz that one is my fav poem from all my poems! The title is THE KEEPER'S LAST LIGHT

[gilded lichen]

Took the words right outta my mouth again😆 finally indeed! 😆

[gilded lichen]

I did, and I really loved it (genuinely loved it)

If you're up for it, I could tag you in an already existing poem of mine 🤧

[fathom gorge]

Lol not my fault I guess we share the same braincells😆🫶💗

[fathom gorge]

I'm glad and happy!!💗💗💗🎶

[fathom gorge]

Ooo of course I would love to!!!!!!!!

[scarlet heath]

hi, could u also read a poem of mine?

it's beautiful

[gilded lichen]

I suppose we do😆
And I tagged you in it.... Named it the Forgotten playground

[slim rune]

Wonderful! @gilded lichen has just progressed to level 6!

[fathom gorge]

Okay I would love to!!

[gilded lichen]

Tysm bro 😆