The Awakening

[idle yew]

The poem is very calm and relaxing, the theme of it is amazing, well done

@vague elk

[elfin locust]

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[vague elk]

thank you so much💞💞💞

[elfin locust]

@idle yew is now following @vague elk.

[idle yew]

heres a follow, well deserve

[prime spindle]

The description and metaphorical language is wonderfully done, you can feel the impact but it's still light on the heart the aesthetic is definitely inline with Victorian esque mini horror

The sudden transition from night to day kinda turns to the awakening of humans but at first I thought you'd talk about the awakening of those ghosts so a rather unexpected end

But the way you described the pain of the grave-dwellers is peak description so little words used but crazy imagery

Living up to the motto of "show, don't tell"

[vague elk]

dude my jaw literally dropped reading this review. LITERALLY. i appreciate it so damn much!! That was exactly the goal, though. to nudge the reader towards the mystery, not to expose it bare. a loaded whisper.

[vague elk]

YOU GET IT. YOU GET THE "BEST POETRY COMMENT IVE EVER GOTTEN" AWARD

[prime spindle]

Awww that's so sweet thank yiuuu 😝😭🤍🤍

[prime spindle]

Hehe I've had experience with poems like these (my first was inspired by William Wordsworth so yeah) I'd be very happy if you check out my poems too and drop feedback

[vague elk]

and i'd be very happy to do so!! tag me!

[prime spindle]

Alrighty!!!

[shut raptor]

This poem's imagery is well constructed making it easier for the reader to imagine it

Well done

[vague elk]

thank you!