The Fear That Fell Like Rain (Hymn: 4)

[sudden moon]

@undone cairn

@visual portal

@tender rover

@hollow verge

@prime cedar

@unborn oar

@sudden moon

@bitter sun

@dusk zinc

[hollow verge]

I love the way this poem is, describing rain of fear. My favorite weather is rain

[sudden moon]

@oak lark

@wicked finch

@graceful sonnet

[dusk zinc]

depressing poem ngl but its decent

[unborn oar]

I love this one

great poem

[sudden moon]

yeah lol...i'm fkin distressed nowadays

[sudden moon]

thankyou

[dusk zinc]

same here. Just smoked one

[sudden moon]

gaaawwwd

[dusk zinc]

gawdddd

gawdddddddd

[sudden moon]

are you spamming fr

[graceful sonnet]

Beautiful but can't relate coz I'm in love lmao

Yep i know

It's beautiful

[sudden moon]

thankyou so much

[visual portal]

It's good tbh I like your poems it really expresses the way u think and feel... And ofc u know the main reason why I like your poem...I mean I can relate with your way of expressing things..

[prime cedar]

The rhyming is so satisfying

[undone cairn]

haven't started reading yet but the title is chef's kiss

AYO I READ THIS LIKE A SONG HAHHAHAA

IDC WHAT THEME THIS POEM WAS. I HAD FUN READING IT LIKE A SONG

LOB THISSS

BRO IS WRITING POEM POPSTYLE

[sudden moon]

[sudden moon]

thanks thanks

[sudden moon]

❤️

[sudden moon]

broo..what did you understand though 🦥 like did you get what i was talking about here

@undone cairn

[sudden moon]

@atomic jacinth @crystal wind

[atomic jacinth]

AHHH LOVED IT

[undone cairn]

ik ik
Its about you experiencing kindness but instead your fears are stronger than your trust.

[sudden moon]

lol

kk

@fossil pumice @

[undone cairn]

Is it correct

[sudden moon]

yeah haha...u r a genius lol

[undone cairn]

https://tenor.com/view/tanmaylive1122-gif-27558259

[sudden moon]

🦥

[fossil pumice]

Awesome topic

[sudden moon]

The Fear That Fell Like Rain (Him: 4)

[sudden moon]

@light grotto

[sudden moon]

@graceful sonnet

[sudden moon]

The Fear That Fell Like Rain (Hymn: 4)

[sudden moon]

@thorny grotto

[light grotto]

This my favourite one out of all I 4 parts I have read!! You really captured the emotions so well like how it was a illusion created by fear(the whole thrunder storm). I really like the flow and structure!! And the tone of the poem too!!!! LOVEEEE THISSSSSSS (*≧∇≦)ﾉ💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗

[sudden moon]

thankssssss

cutieeeee

[thorny grotto]

It was a not so good read for me this time because I couldn't really pay attention because of the too much **"LY"**😅... It's prolly just me this time because most people seem to get it

[sudden moon]

no no its ok..i do tend to go overboard sometimes with the rhyming..i know that