Angel on earth | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

novel pulsar May 24, 2025, 11:03 PM

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Forget me not
Thy beauty, majestic
You haunt my dreams
Yet I miss the moon

Forget me not
Oh angel on earth
My heart is broken
Your presence renews it

hate me not
Oh fairest heart
Bright like snow
In the Arctic skies

Despise me not
My tears gone dry
Yet your smile nourishes
These eyes of mine

hollow karma May 24, 2025, 11:05 PM

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ooooo I like the opening a lot!

novel pulsar May 24, 2025, 11:05 PM

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Thank you

hollow karma May 24, 2025, 11:05 PM

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the poem itself reminds me of forget-me-nots (the flowers hehe)

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Yes of course!!

novel pulsar May 24, 2025, 11:06 PM

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Never heard of it but I'm glad you like it

Its a version I created from a poem I wrote for my crush but I never showed her it(too scared)😅

hollow karma May 24, 2025, 11:07 PM

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ahh, I'm sure she would love it!! go for it :))

novel pulsar May 24, 2025, 11:07 PM

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I'll try

hollow karma May 24, 2025, 11:07 PM

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good luck with her mate! you got this ^^

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