#Poet

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misty topaz
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Hello! how can I help? what exactly are you looking for feedback on?? The poem is really interesting by the way! I like the writing imagery within it!!

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You structured it pretty well, The grammar looks fine!

From what I see the poem as being about is a poet struggling to write better, like the speaker is reaching for success yet they fail to see their work as good enough, rewriting and rewriting eager to achieve something better than before even if it is just a loop in the end.

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understandable, The vagueness makes it better in a way, I think people being able to put their own meanings to works is really cool, so YES your work is phenomonal :))

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May I ask for the inspiration behind it??

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oooo interesting

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I see how it connects-- vaguely ofc but still :)

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ohhhh Understandable

hardy talonBOT