#Guilty Pleasure (Hymn: 1)

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quiet frost
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@rustic temple

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@dull tree

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@whole creek

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@little canopy

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@silver estuary

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@tepid gorge

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@crisp patrol

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@warm wagon

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@granite pewter

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@zinc zealot

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@crude blaze

granite pewter
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interesting poem

crude blaze
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Yepp

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I'm here

quiet frost
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now read🔪

quiet frost
crude blaze
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Okie🥺

granite pewter
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yw

quiet frost
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@indigo grove

crude blaze
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Beautifully penned a Convo between diary and you 👏
Your beauty lies in your simplicity yet full of emotions

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Great writing keep it up
I really relish reading your poems

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rustic temple
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I love, specially the rhyming.
I can see it like almsot the diary is another person and we are seeing a argument

quiet frost
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thankyou so much

dry heart
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I love the poem😭 so good

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@tawdry folio

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@rigid saddle

silver estuary
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i really love this one this is so good amazing

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this one deserves a star emoji

dull tree
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Aww diary are so cute to me

quiet frost
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@tepid gorge girll where are you...i've been waiting for ur reviewwwSobbinTheLanaDelReyOut

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tepid gorge
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go study well

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and kill those exams

tepid gorge
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Thank youu , I'll be back shortly and I'll read it and give some feedback ^^

tawdry folio
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the start is really VERY INTERESTING. That sold me already and the main part is good too. What's the guilty pleasure though?

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also, is this the poem you asked me to read yesterday?

quiet frost
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the guilty pleasure is hidden in words

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u have to find it out ur self

tawdry folio
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lol..i mentioned that i dont want others to find it so das why

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its hidden

tawdry folio
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um

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is it

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post nut clarity

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💀

quiet frost
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the fk

tawdry folio
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sorrySobbinTheLanaDelReyOut

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lmao

quiet frost
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find it ur self

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i know u can

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pay attention

tawdry folio
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is it a romantic interest

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that you talk to late at night

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hawww

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seeeeeeeeeee

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i knewwwwwwwwww

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itttttttt

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but why is that a guilty pleasure

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thats why I asked lol

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theft? of what? Why? How

indigo grove
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🔖

tawdry folio
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hmm
interesting

white onyxBOT
tawdry folio
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also

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you may delete your revelation about whats the guilty pleasure. I was kidding I wasn't angry lol

quiet frost
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ok ok

white onyxBOT
zinc zealot
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Book mark I'll read this later

quiet frost
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kk

quasi fox
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love this!

bright fable
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WOW I LOVE THIS

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quiet frost
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Guilty Pleasure (Him: 1)

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Guilty Pleasure (Him: 1)

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@atomic minnow

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@waxen kiln

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😭

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atomic minnow
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Broo knowing the story a bit I really understands the feelings in the poem😭🤌 I love how you didn't specified that guilty pleasure and left upto the reader to decide! But you still left a tiny bit of clue that is hard to spot!! Like this "There's this midnight anchor, Its words heal my heart like a thread used to refine" but there's one thing I don't get why is it a guilty pleasure? Why do you feel the guilt in it?😭 I'm just legit confused(T^T) but it's totally okay if you can't answer💝💗

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Loved this peom!!! And I loved how you added the stanza about the diary speaking like the 2nd stanza. I just like it that the first 3 stanza's are like a conversion

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atomic minnow
atomic minnow
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Guilty Pleasure (Hymn: 1)

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@honest pollen

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It was a somewhat stressful read because I was trying to find what exactly you where trying to say, then got it at the later part of the piece😔

And also prolly gonna be an unwanted opinion, but people judge because they see, if they don't, no judging🤷😆

quiet frost