Our Love of Unresolved Ends

[radiant dirge]

hmmm

I think the title itself is pretty fitting, but if you dont think so then it must be changed if you cannot come to like it. What is the main message that you want to be conveyed when reading the poem?

[naive siren]

It's abt 2 ppl falling in love knowing there's no future and will be left hurt but still don't wish to leave but one of them has to someday just to move on for the better of both and so they leave @radiant dirge

[radiant dirge]

alright let me think

[naive siren]

Mhm

[radiant dirge]

Our Love of Unresolved Ends

Love That Moves Backwards

Longing For Love That Will Always Lack

I dont know if this is your style, lmk how i can conform and conjure better

[naive siren]

1st one's good

[radiant dirge]

aight

wanna check out my poem

[naive siren]

Sure

Or Love of Unresolved Ends

[radiant dirge]

Our*

[naive siren]

Our Love of Unresolved Ends

[naive siren]

@lucid raven
@vale plover
@yellinaa._#0000
@light arrow

[vale plover]

SO SO RELATABLEEE

it is so beautiful

[light arrow]

this is like a punch in the gut. wow this poem is so relatable. i really love this one it's so beautiful

[vale plover]

and brought back some memories

[light arrow]

great poem

[naive siren]

:))

[vale plover]

it is an amazing poem @naive siren

[naive siren]

Thnkyouu

[lucid raven]

i love the lines. It's a good poem.
I didn't quite understand the relation to the title though

[naive siren]

Its abt 2 lovers they love each other ready to give it all but still know that they don't have any future and hence have to separate someday with an ache of heart so bad where none of em wanted to leave but did for the other's good and thus there's no end no happy ending just a confusion of what if they actually didn't leave what if they thrived and actually had a future bright what if it was just their assumption of dark future or their fear for having harsh ending

@lucid raven

[lucid raven]

damn that hurt right here in my meow meow

[naive siren]

Huh 😭

[naive siren]

@native anchor

[native anchor]

I see it is striking writers right where it ties to their, emotions. Me as well. Lovely! I’d remove the first comma and let that line run up til “to see our dreams unravel…” to give a more of a uh, leading hook or like, deep feeling of what’s to come. ofc don’t have to. This is great. Thank you for sharing !