men deserve love too

[thick marsh]

@muted depot @fringe dagger @narrow chasm

[fringe dagger]

i was about to get really sad until I read this "And he cried so hard he had a nosebleed" 😂
But apart from that I really love this. One of my fav even though its quite simple (because I'm a boiii )

[muted depot]

Awww it's soo cute 😭😭

[thick marsh]

awhhh thank youuuu i am so glad btw that nosebleed part is true there was a vid abt some gf talking abt it

it was sooo so sad

[thick marsh]

thanksss a lot

[muted depot]

Its even cuterrrr😭😭😭🙏🏻💗

[narrow chasm]

Great one @thick marsh

[thick marsh]

tyyyy

[fringe dagger]

whaa da helll I thought that happens only in anime?!!

and its sad? I found the nosebleed funny

[thick marsh]

BROOO THIS IS AFTER SEEING SO MANY SAD VIDS ABT THIS

[thick marsh]

yeah.. well for me hehe

cuz some guys get so judged

there was a vid abt someone asking guys who do u talk to when smth happens and u aren't ok ykyk and they were like no one

yall call somebody?

LIKE OUCHHH OMG THEY WERE GOING THROUGH MANY THINGS ALONE

WITH NO ONE TO TALK TO

HAVING NO ONE TO LISTEN

[fringe dagger]

hmm

its true in general, yes

[thick marsh]

EXACTLYYY

i hope it changes

somehow

it js heartbreaking..

[fringe dagger]

[narrow chasm]

That's sad

[fringe dagger]

i'd like to thank you on behalf of the bearers of XY chromosomes

[warped plover]

*i'd like to thank you

on behalf of the bearers

of XY chromosomes*

- _yashp.

[narrow chasm]

Wow 😭

[fringe dagger]

https://tenor.com/view/shifu-kung-fu-panda-bow-salute-pride-gif-1615650347295901507

[thick marsh]

I'd like to thank them all for staying strong but i hope yall have someone

[warped plover]

*I'd like to thank them

all for staying strong but i

hope yall have someone*

- 0024_unknown

[fringe dagger]

you can only hope

[thick marsh]

ikr

[thick marsh]

when i hope i hope BIG

so smth better happen

and ik it will

(i tend to dream big and be delulu)

[narrow chasm]

:))

[fringe dagger]

dreams can only take u so far
||to delululu||

[thick marsh]

frrr

but some come true

and even those small ones

ARE HUGEEE

for me

so this will happen too

( i can also very very optimistic )

[muted depot]

That's manifestation my gurl!! 🙏🏻✋🏻✋🏻 Don't stoppp

[thick marsh]

YESHHHH WILL DO

🫡

[fringe dagger]

the ones when you wake up really late?

[muted depot]

Delulu is solulu

[thick marsh]

*bombastic side eye

[fringe dagger]

that's good. Keep it up

[thick marsh]

lolz

actually js small things yk

[fringe dagger]

WHAT? YOU'LL DO WHAT? STOP?😵‍💫😭

[fringe dagger]

double bombastic side eye

[muted depot]

Besides kafka said "By believing passionately in something that still does not exist, we create it. The nonexistent is whatever we have not sufficiently desired."

[thick marsh]

i love the rain i once asked for it and BOOM next day it was rainy and that entire week i was so happyy

[thick marsh]

NOOOOO

NEVERRR

I AM NEVAH EVAH STOPPING THIS

[thick marsh]

TRUE DAT

yall i wanna show u smth

gimme awhile

ima show u the vids

i saws

saw

that made me write this

[fringe dagger]

hmm same concept is used in the Sword of the Demon Hunter anime

[fringe dagger]

damn wow

[fringe dagger]

okiess

[thick marsh]

RIGHTTTT I WAS LITERALLY BOUNCING FROM JOYYY

[fringe dagger]

bro went peacock mode

🦚

[thick marsh]

lmao

yeap

[fringe dagger]

oh insta

will see later

thanks for sharing

[thick marsh]

yhh my friend sent it

[thick marsh]

there is like.. one or two more hehe.. but welcomeee

[fringe dagger]

be careful though. Sometimes its visible which account shared it

[thick marsh]

omg rlly??

[fringe dagger]

yes

[thick marsh]

thennn.. nvm

ima delete that and screen record

[fringe dagger]

lol

or you can send via a spare acc

if you have one

[thick marsh]

i don't use insta

[fringe dagger]

oh

oh okay you forwarded the link your friend sent lol

[thick marsh]

yeap

bc me no use insta

Most men go through life without experiencing the joy of receiving flowers, a gesture often associated with appreciation and care. It’s a tradition we see mostly for women, while men are often celebrated in different ways. However, giving flowers to men can be a meaningful way to show love, respect, or gratitude. 🌼

Flowers are not just gifts; they are symbols of thoughtfulness and emotional connection, something everyone deserves to feel. 🌸

Normalizing the act of gifting flowers to men can break stereotypes and bring happiness to their lives. 🌺

Whether it’s a father, a brother, a friend, or a partner, surprising them with a bouquet can brighten their day and make them feel valued. 💐

It doesn’t have to be a grand occasion – small moments like appreciating their hard work, celebrating their achievements, or simply thanking them can be perfect reasons to gift flowers. 🌷

Let’s embrace this positive change and show that men, too, deserve such simple yet heartfelt gestures. 🌻

A flower’s beauty and fragrance know no boundaries, and its ability to bring smiles is universal. 🌹

It’s time to make every moment count and express our care for the men in our lives in unique and thoughtful ways. 🌟 from one of the vids

@fringe dagger @muted depot

[muted depot]

I saw those videos actually 😭😭😭 unbelievable u wrote a poem on themmmmm

Its amazing

[thick marsh]

thank youuuuuuu veryyyyy muchhhhhhh ♥️ 🌷 💐

hehe last one.. @muted depot @fringe dagger

[thick marsh]

@scenic bluff

[scenic bluff]

yo this is really great. the poem is so cute. especially that line with the nosebleed i really love it

[thick marsh]

thank youuu

[stray shale]

Beautiful poem mate. I won't lie, nothing fancy or poetic but it's about a social issue, a genuine concern. And that's more than enough.
Your poem beautifully captured the overlooked emotional needs of men. Men often long for unconditionality, perhaps as a society we're too quick to judge
Regarding that nosebleed line, I had seen it in some reel. That is where its inspired by, I suppose

Eitherway, beautiful poem
Well Written!! 🍻

[fringe dagger]

helluu
sorry I'll see tomorrow lol

[thick marsh]

yhh that is exactly what it was abt the inspo was from a good friend of mine and thank you very veryyy muchhh

[thick marsh]

its fineee

[thick marsh]

@stray shale

this right??

[stray shale]

Yeah

[thick marsh]

@cold mason

@sinful quest

[sinful quest]

This one really speaks to me, past two years have been relationships ending terribly for me

[thick marsh]

ouch- hope u meet someone better that spoils u rotten and treats u right

@deft rose

@digital tree

@gusty crest

[gusty crest]

told him he's deserving of love And he cried so hard he hada nosebleed" was fire 😅

[thick marsh]

hehe thank youu

[cold mason]

Thats true, men deserve love aswell as women do, equally: good poem though @thick marsh im impressed

[thick marsh]

ty ty

@bright kindle

[bright kindle]

Rapunzel tagging me

[thick marsh]

yesh

[thick marsh]

sooo.. feedbacks.. ?

@slate tiger

[bright kindle]

give me like 72 hours since so many tags also my feedback needs work lol

[thick marsh]

LMAO WOWWW busy man i see yeap np its alright good luck with the other stuff

[thick marsh]

@upper hedge

[upper hedge]

PERIODDD BOOKIE

[thick marsh]

@jagged sedge

@umbral coyote

[umbral coyote]

?

Nice

[jagged sedge]

Simple yet rlly good
Tbf I don't like too much repetition in a poem

[thick marsh]

noted thanksss

[crude raven]

This is exactly what I wanna say to him

"and I'll wipe your tears,
As I wait patiently for you to wipe mine.
Because even though you think you're undeserving,
There's a lot for me to rhyme."

[thick marsh]

i love it.. 🤧 i get the feeling thats so beautiful..

sniffles

[thick marsh]

@hollow geyser@atomic badger @fringe ruin @sleek tartan

@sour dock

[sour dock]

Thank you, and yes we do 🥹

[fringe ruin]

This is more free verse than I’m used to giving feedback to but I’ll give it a go :​D Take my words with a grain of salt tho, I’m a formal poet through and through, this style isn’t exactly my forte lol

Very strong use of repetition here. Almost feels like an incantation. The individual stanzas feel sort of self-contained, but don’t feel complete when looked at individually. When viewed in the context of the whole poem, though, they slot together like finely machined aluminum. Kinda hypnotic in a way. And that ending is very clever!! Leaving the sentence unfinished is a really nice stylistic choice; It doesn’t need to be finished, the rest of the poem already sets up what’s supposed to be there. I think it’s really cool :​D

[thick marsh]

@maiden pond

@hoary spruce

[rustic herald]

I love this poem. The part about the nosebleed made me laugh though. Hahahaha. I love it.

[thick marsh]

frfr there was smth that said the same that most men only get flowers at funerals and that is so so sooo unfair and thanks could you check out #1375419221663547452

[thick marsh]

lolz yeap its a true thing though

saw a reel abt it

and thank youuu glad you liked it

[thick marsh]

@mint plinth

[hoary spruce]

Honestly idk how to process this as a man

I appreciate how your poem addresses different aspects of the expectation men only have value through providing, the pressure to always be strong and the isolation that can come from having no one to listen

I needed to read this today. It means something to have someone recognize this side of us.... Thanks

[thick marsh]

welcomesss very glad it did smth 💐

[thick marsh]

@lean tapir

[thick marsh]

@sturdy rapids

[thick marsh]

@copper pecan

[thick marsh]

@modern bison

[copper pecan]

A bit too simple for my taste. I feel like everything you're saying here could be said in a more complex way but that said, everything you said here is very true, and I agree and can relate to it. This could be worthwhile with a good delivery, like a motivational speech, it could really touch people.

[thick marsh]

ouhh thank youuu

[subtle thicket]

banger!

[modern bison]

I

am

Zore.

It's amazing

👏

[thick marsh]

thanks i wrote an improved version can u check that out..? @modern bison

[mint plinth]

DAMNN THI qaS IS GOOD. I love the repitition of "Men deserves love too" it really adds a wait to this poem! I'm not a man but this is definetly a emotional piece! Well done!!(* >ω<)

[thick marsh]

#1385813458783703131 instead of dis pls read dis the improved one