I Am Still Where You Left Me

[muted delta]

This i think is pretty great, personal ? I’d lean into the double usage of words maybe more, i like the take take a different road. If you meant to do that ! It’ll be for the better could be edited maybe interesting. Cus into “you’ll move on” you’re changing the way your speaking, but if this is meant to be “broken” in your speech patterns i like it!

[fair yarrow]

Thank you!

Huuuu, I also think the lines after the "You'll more on" part seemed to take a different route to how I was originally speaking, I'll figure our a way to try to "fix" it

Thanks for taking the time to read and giving a feedback!