#requiem for a forlorn youth

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boreal kiln
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Hm, is this possibly forbidden love?
"Perverse bliss"
"Requiem for a forlorn youth"

Or am I getting a wrong picture?

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Is the word "youth" used in plural form?

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At first I suggested unrequited love because I assumed it was used as singular

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But "both hands"

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Oh

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Unless

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Only the hands of one person

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Waitt

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It could also actually just be one person

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Hmm

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You left so much room for ambiguities

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I love it

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Yeah

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I love how you write

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Simple, yet containing so much meaning

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Real events

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Insane

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Alright

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Another lovely poem, thank you

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Oh, wow

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I'd love to hear it

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I'm work more on metaphors but my poems are also based on real events

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Yours is direct but leaves room for ambiguity at the same time

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Idk if I explained that properly

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I just

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Love the way you write

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So much depth in such simple words

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Yeah, I do

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I didn't expect this😭

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But the title make more sense now

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Yeah

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Heh

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Yeah, sure!

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Wait I'm having trouble with my net💔

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Ok wait nevermind

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Broooo

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Dude it's just stuck like this

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It's okay now

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That pissed me off

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I love the melody

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I also usually listen to stuff with the same vibe

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Heh

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Wait

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You said

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Real events

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So

lone mantle
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how does this have 60 comments after 1 minute

boreal kiln
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"I pretend like she's still at the other side of the aisle"

lone mantle
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yeah hahahah

boreal kiln
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He is, trust

lone mantle
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yeah he is very good

boreal kiln
lone mantle
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im just tryna get some tips

boreal kiln
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!

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I might just actually add this to my playlist

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Ah, alright

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I did another poem by the way

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Could I tag you?

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Just something that came up in my mind