#The Fool

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calm carbon
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The mountains and water smiled at the features'
star-like eyes craved in my bones and heart .
Lovesickness dyed unforgettable love insanity.
Waiting for snow , waiting for destiny's favor ,
waiting for you a lifetime .

Yearning surpasses time , waiting brings no bloom ,
the waiting that can't be waited for.
In every corners of this earthly realm ,
everywhere is envy and self-suffering.

The tones of tenderness. Every sound is silence.
It's imprisonment. Scenes unfurl within myself,
it's the coming road , and returning road.
Life is like dancing in the snow , every steps are lonely.

It's loneliness , coldness. Looking out for
leisurely contemplation of the scenery.
Just to see your glimpse standing across the snow.
The illusions of yours haunted me down to the core.

Not because you hurt me , but because I loved you ,
so much of the love can turned self into the fool.
The fool who yearned for the snow in every winter.
The fool who searched for you in every corner of the earth.
The fool who exchanged pride and hold your hand for a lifetime.
The fool who waited for the waiting that can't be returned.

The fool , is it.

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@trail flame here!

trail flame
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okay firstly

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wow

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secondly WOW

calm carbon
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I-

trail flame
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Not because you hurt me , but because I loved you ,
so much of the love can turned self into the fool.
The fool who yearned for the snow in every winter.
The fool who searched for you in every corner of the earth.
The fool who exchanged pride and hold your hand for a lifetime.
The fool who waited for the waiting that can't be returned.

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this specific stanza was cherry on top

calm carbon
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im a yearner ik SobbinTheLanaDelReyOut idek who i write for

calm carbon
trail flame
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a beautiful ending to the stanzas filled with yearning and love

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the yearning of love, soo much that you only listen to your heart and ignore the screams of the mind

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like a dog who so desperately loves unconditionally

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this is beautiful

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hauntingly beautiful

calm carbon
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SobbinTheLanaDelReyOut thank you , potato

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it really meants alot to me

trail flame
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tho i must say some parts could be tweaked to enhance the flow of the poem and you could also work on typography to enhance the emotions in the poem but regardless of all that. THIS IS ONE HECK OF A POEM

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and because of that

potent edgeBOT
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@trail flame is now following @calm carbon.

trail flame
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WELL PENNED

calm carbon
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OMGGG

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THANK YOU

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how do you do that thing

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sorry i am inexperience in those command

trail flame
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/ and then type follow

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no spaces

trail flame
calm carbon
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im a cavewoman

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somehow

trail flame
calm carbon
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@granite imp

granite imp
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I still love the imagery

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And the last stanza😭😭😭

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Not cause you hurt me likekekek rhahwhahajaks