#🪞 Mirror of Perfection🪞

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pallid pine
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Written to a very special girl

Once upon a time was a mirror of reflection,
That reflected only the greatest of perfection.
Seen through it was purely their youth,
As else it showed the dreaded truth
Of their repugnant raisin skin,
And putrid, rotten akin.

So gaze in gentle fear,
And see you clear.
Your heart beats,
Afraid to meet
Whom to see.
A pretty she?
An ugly me?
Just let it be
And breathe.

Bathe beneath
The Sun’s seas
Of light’s breeze.

The mirror churns;
Soon will you learn
If you lean on beauty,
Or fall to awful scrutiny.
Your vision is turning blurry,
Though I wonder why you worry.

Tales are told of a tulip through stories,
Telling us of your elegance and endless glories.
For such a jewel to be as pretty as you are delightful
Is a charm cherished across all worlds who aren’t rightful
Of the sacred woman who brings false goddesses their faces hidden from both your gorgeousness and their grotesqueness;
Every mortal and immortal lost through life with their eyes closed, too ashamed to avow that they’ll always be less.

“Stand before me,
And witness a glory greater than envy.
For whom I reflect is a girl that beauty protects,
From atrocities and languishing facades, who all neglect
The pretty painted with passion and poetry that all read the same—
A hymn sung from the heavens of the flawlessness where she’s framed,
Resting eternally on an amethyst pedestal, where the world must admire;
An enchanted excellence eyed by eons’ thirst for apotheosis that they aspire
To become. Yet their shapeless wax burns along with dreams they can’t grasp,
Waning into the women who will never be you, so they wear a mask
To conceal the radiance that they will forever and ever lack,
Apart from the blinding light that this mirror refracts—
Your opulence, a gift shown to this mirror,
One I could never hold nearer.”

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outer saffron
manic latch
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The hymn sung / flawlessness line. You better share it ☺️

pallid pine
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I did and it was really amazing 😁

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Well she thought so I mean

manic latch
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Yaayyy

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pallid pine
nimble dust
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This gives me such a Dorian gray aesthetic I love it

pallid pine
pallid pine
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@ruby zodiac

ruby zodiac
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yo oh my god man first of all the form the typography it forms like a half of a mirror bro. but hold on the lemme read this one

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hey yo man. i can't fathom how you make bangers to bangers to bangers back to back again bro. god damn. this is too amazing man with that crazy alliteration oh my god bro. the freaking imagery alone gets this at 10 out of 10. i really love the lines: "the pretty painted with passion and poetry that all read the same" and an enchanted excellence eyed by eons' thirst for apotheosis that they aspire to become. god freaking damn. rhythm: 10. rhyme: 10 alliteration: 10 imagery: 10 typography: 10 dog everything about this is a 10 out of 10 out of 10 bro. you know what this poem is perfect bro. perfect. as the title said mirror of perfection this is just perfection made bro. its a masterpiece. please ping me in every one of your poems bro. you know i will give this one about 10 big booms

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@pallid pine

pallid pine
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😭😭😭

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First off thank you so much for the effort and second thank you so much for your compliments!!!

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Make sure to ping me in everything too bro

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I want to have been there for nearly all 100 of your sonnets (we met a little later)

plain cave
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the girl is very lucky cuz wow that poem is js wow

balmy pendant
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She must have been very pleased with the poem, it is beautiful!

pallid pine
pallid pine
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@grizzled sierra

grizzled sierra
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I love it very much!:3😁

pallid pine
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you read that fast

gloomy plover
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Beautiful!!

pallid pine