#Cherry Fingertips

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pure crypt
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There's so many things I want to say
That I can't put it into words.
I really don't want to sound cliche,
But I know these things must be heard.

The dictionary doesn't give me a phrase
To describe how I feel about you,
But I know you put me in a daze.
One that I won't ever get through.

I search for the right words, the right rhyme
None of these scriptures win first prize.
I try to capture you in time,
But I just get lost in your eyes.

That's one thing that I, myself, can describe
Your eyes, the window to your beautiful soul,
The way they gleam, I'd paint and scribe.
The patch of blue, running uncontrolled.

They hold me captive,
Still and endless, pulling me close.
When you stare at me, it leaves me passive.
Slowing my ever increasing pulse.

You color the blush on my cheeks with your cherry fingertips,
And that's always worth the apocalypse.

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Fire poem

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Trying to describe how much this person means to you but just can't find the words

They struggling but this is a heartwarming poem and the writing is trying they're trying there best and that's what's matters

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@patent hornet
@sharp gust
Yall might like this poem

smoky starBOT
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*@Andri (Lover

Girl) @aairanotfound Yall

might like this poem*

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Fire

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Idk 5,96/10

sharp gust
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Beautiful! It's simple yet effective. Great job with the rhyme scheme, doesn't feel forced at all. Well done

pure crypt
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# pure crypt There's so many things I want to say That I can't put it into words. I really do...

Your poem feels like the very patch of blue,
That you describe

I can't put it into words
Yet you do, in an achingly honest way, stitching feelings into line that signify emotional intelligence and sincerity

The rhymes don't feel forced, there's no forced sweetness, just truth, soft as a whisper, bright as a gleam
You don't chase perfection, and that’s the beauty of it!!

I search for the right words, the right rhyme
Know that you've already found them, they may not be luminous or perfect, but they're yours, and that is what makes them glow!!
Well Written Mate!!🍻

pure crypt