Loss For Words

[golden parcel]

I don’t know how to break these lines
so I’m at a loss for words
i pinned my thoughts
on the clipboard
it has purple dots on the top
then I flip it over
like a medium-size carpet
i hope I’m not tripping
because I saw a flying pig
speaking Italian
or was that me speaking Italian,
and I just forgot?
or am I hearing things?
i think the moon is red tonight
i think it’s a red flashlight
flickering in the ocean
i’m not sure if I’m dreaming
or dreaming within a dream
with no meaning
i suddenly got a brain freeze
is that a sign I should stop typing?
my comment has been deleted
into oblivion
i don’t want to shut myself down,
i’m not a laptop
but my shadows are not reloading
and these lines are shorter than my shorts
i need another clipboard.

[sage solstice]

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[golden parcel]

@tidal gorge

[balmy pilot]

bro your too onto the stream of consciousness, and the style shifts showing it's a first write meaning no real coorect revision.

To be helpful(not critical!!!)
ur reaching the point of high level internet level writting, but u lack the compression of words and the wholeness feeling throughout

[ornate cloak]

Wonderful! @balmy pilot has just progressed to level 1!

[golden parcel]

@sturdy prawn

@fleet pawn

[versed hornet]

Woooowwww....nice job, my friend

[warm hawk]

at a loss for words

not lost

wonderful poem

[fleet pawn]

The end really caught me! I love the metaphors you incorporated in this. It’s an amazing poem

[golden parcel]

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[sturdy prawn]

firsly “I saw a flying pig speaking Italian” its gold LMAO. kinda whimsical, slightly absurd, and somehow deeply emotional(? feels like ur not trying to explain it but ur letting us feel it lol. “i’m not sure if I’m dreaming or dreaming within a dream with no meaning” i feel like these capture exactly what it’s like to spiral while being too aware. It’s like anxiety in poetic form(? and it works. “i’m not a laptop but my shadows are not reloading” is lowkey genius. It’s funny, but also kind of tragic? Like someone trying to reboot emotionally and failing😭