#Cats Are Cute

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sick marsh
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Cats are cute,
But so are dogs.
Dogs are cute,
But dogs bite — and that's not cute.
So are dogs cute?
Certainly not.

So we come again:
Cats are cute,
But so are mice.
Mice are cute,
But mice spread disease — and that's not cute.
So are mice cute?
Certainly not.

So we come again:
Cats are cute,
But so are babies.
Babies are cute,
But babies cry and yell — and that's not cute.
So are babies cute?
Certainly not.

So we come again:
Cats are cute,
But you yourself are cute.
But the way you look at me with those begrudging eyes..
So are you cute?
Most certainly so.

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i've never really did poetry before and like feedback regarding this one i've just thought up

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any comments i'd love to hear them

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❤️

raw zephyr
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this is so cute and its rlly good for one of your first poems?!L.,.,.laliswishsosh this is actually adorable keep writing 🥺❤️❤️❤️

sick marsh
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is there anything you disliked

raw zephyr
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honestly no, i really enjoyed the repetition too in your poem

sick marsh
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im not that much of a far thinker, so I was hoping I could go for a short and sweet one which I could stick to and not get lost in myself