#Basketball With Martin In The Fall

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dry nebula
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Basketball With Martin In The Fall

sinful bolt
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the red leaves, rusty fences, faded basketball lines,all of this sets up a melancholic autumn atmosphere. It feels like a memory being stirred. There's this bittersweet, gentle tone to it,like smt deeply personal is being unwrapped, but u still let joy in at the end.The casual "Sup." and the friendly exchange between u and Martin brings life into the poem. It makes the memory vividIHaveTheBreadKitty

dry nebula
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Why is the post deleted? Lucky for me I save my works on word.

fallen frigate
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