clever galleon
It's a perplexity,
A tragedy,
A little "you've been bad to me."
I wish that I could see---
How this walls been crumblin' 'round,
but I can't take my eyes off this anal-o-gy.
This is my first free verse in a long time, it's very different from my usual poems, so thoughts would be seriously appreciated.
sinful glade
its cool imo pretty serious
cloud willow
It's a perplexity,
A tragedy,
A little "you've been bad to me."
I wish that I co...
It's a good start id say!
Keep practising and you'll kill it
clever galleon
Is there anything specific you think it could be improved on?