#poem about love(it has no name)

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lament fox
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I have never sank so low,
my love for you is far from hollow,
I think about you every night,
and the "what if" feelings keep me occupied.

If you want you can have my soul,
but my heart - you have already stole.
When Im in your presence, my hands shake,
and you raise my adrenaline!

My chances of loving you are low.
Strike me God, this pain I cant endure!
Should I give up on you?
Or maybe keep on chasing after you?

So many issues, overdue,
but the only problem I want to solve,
is the connection between me and you,
but I am forced to lie low.

My hopes are high,
but all you do is just pass by...
I feel like with you - I won the lotto,
but the price slips through like a ghost in the grotto...

You ignore me,
like a dried up old tree,
still I see you as a flower:
cute, humble and with love you are showered!

If I cant have you, Ill treasure the ache,
Ill keep on living as my heart slowly breaks.
I will keep on loving you, even if you dont know,
and hope that one day your love for me would grow.

fair drift
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I struggle to keep reading after the improper use of "Sink", change that to Sank. =p

lament fox
noble skiff
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yo its accturally good like

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links to reality

pliant nacelle
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There's a lot of grammar mistakes and wouldn't
My chances of loving you are low
Be my chances of you loving me too are low?

I really like what this poem conveys though.

blissful widget
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It is really good, have nothing to say except for the grammar problems like the others.

lament fox
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also english is my 3rd language so its far from perfect lol

pliant nacelle
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Ooh what is your first languages?

lament fox
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thats why it was easier to learn english