Live, love, die | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

light bridge Apr 15, 2025, 2:42 AM

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I've lived
I've loved
I've died

The crushing weight of my self lift off
As I sit on the shore
I've died

The gentle water sifting the worry off from upon my feet
I've died

I watch my memories set
And their colors pass
I've lived, I've loved, I've died
I laugh

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It was a challenge to write a 5 min poem based off the image

dire idolBOT Apr 15, 2025, 2:43 AM

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*It was a challenge

to write a 5 min poem

based off the image*

light bridge Apr 15, 2025, 2:43 AM

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Oh sick

crude sable Apr 15, 2025, 2:48 AM

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Pretty good for such a short time frame

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I'd definitely revisit this outside of the challenge

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But for what it is, the last 2 stanzas are great

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I oftentimes find it hard to write that good on command

light bridge Apr 15, 2025, 2:49 AM

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It kinda just felt natural

light bridge Apr 15, 2025, 2:50 AM

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And thank you btw

viscid pike Apr 15, 2025, 4:54 AM

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so many emotions and emotionless in one short poem

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absolutely amazing

light bridge Apr 15, 2025, 1:14 PM

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Bro, thanks

viscid pike Apr 15, 2025, 1:14 PM

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np just honest opinion

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