Frostbite | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

vapid shell Apr 14, 2025, 10:34 AM

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@deep elm @wispy lichen @split pilot @slate knoll @glad crown

split pilot Apr 14, 2025, 10:41 AM

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Mmm. I take it this is about professors or leaders who are "cold" and immovable, intolerant to ideas..
Favourite lines is chap the lips line

About freezing those who radiate beauty Into a mold for you to place As a trophy?

slate knoll Apr 14, 2025, 1:25 PM

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Tinnnnyyyy that’s amazing

glad crown Apr 14, 2025, 1:27 PM

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Gosh that last stanza was amazing! Beautiful theme and well written! Great job Tiny!

deep elm Apr 14, 2025, 4:15 PM

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i’ll read this in a few hours when i finish @vapid shell

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❤️❤️

vapid shell Apr 14, 2025, 5:23 PM

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I love seeing others’ perspective so much

vapid shell Apr 14, 2025, 5:24 PM

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Another old poem but one I wrote during a hard time!

vapid shell Apr 14, 2025, 5:24 PM

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Ty hun take it easy!

deep elm Apr 14, 2025, 5:28 PM

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this is beautiful ! i love weather poems as im sure you can tell by now

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i love the structure of it too

vapid shell Apr 14, 2025, 5:31 PM

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Thank you hun!! I really appreciate all yalls feedback ❤️

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