Chakrapocalypse | Manipura Meltdown | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

swift shore Apr 10, 2025, 10:48 PM

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mBHvSo53Uzj6Nrqj65CBR1d2Ws5tTqXa6t4POrOzFnk/edit?usp=drivesdk

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Manipura Meltdown-

Manipura Meltdown: Hellhounds pull the chains of discipline Yanking their master around— Manifesting a Manipura meltdown. The cobras' corrupting kisses Set the Solar Plexus Blackening the sputtering sun within— The savior seethes in everlasting sin— Swollen with self— Overfed with fiction. Q...

swift shore Apr 2, 2026, 8:28 AM

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@junior nebula

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This one is my favorite

junior nebula Apr 2, 2026, 8:44 AM

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Brother, this is well above my level. I am crumpling my dictionary over here and the flow of the lines just kept on dragging my gaze towards the next.

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I searched up alliterations and just wow, I understood it better when reading your poem

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I must come back when I am capable of... well, comprehending such quality poems ._.

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@swift shore notify here too

swift shore Apr 2, 2026, 8:52 AM

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I will eventually. There's a limit on noties

junior nebula Apr 2, 2026, 8:52 AM

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Damn

granite wolfBOT Apr 2, 2026, 8:52 AM

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@junior nebula has sent a notification! - @analog lion @dense thorn @plucky phoenix @silent stag @rigid linden @honest compass @faint light

junior nebula Apr 2, 2026, 8:53 AM

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Not many, but maybe they'll spread the word

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Quality poetry people!

swift shore Apr 2, 2026, 8:56 AM

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Haha loads of people here have read this stuff already

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I wrote this a couple years ago and shared it last spring

junior nebula Apr 2, 2026, 8:59 AM

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Oh

faint light Apr 2, 2026, 9:48 AM

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swift shore https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mBHvSo53Uzj6Nrqj65CBR1d2Ws5tTqXa6t4POrOzFnk/...

First of all, being someone who has been into knowing about chakras for years, it's applaudable how you've described and enchanted the presence of solar plexus in here.

Secondly, the rhyming and especially alliterations in this were awesome. The grammar, punctuations and all the metaphors worked real good.

As for critisism, I don't have much as it's a really well written piece.

"The solar plexus: disempowered—
Is now a nuclear tomb where willpower burns itself as fuel."
"My skin is plastic-packed, ego poised not to perish—
A gravity well where glory once glowed now smothered in smoke." "Perfection poisons potential" loved these three descriptions the most!

Goodluck for the future pieces!...

swift shore Apr 2, 2026, 9:59 AM

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Yay someone gets it woohoo!

faint light Apr 2, 2026, 10:04 AM

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swift shore Yay someone gets it woohoo!

Have written more on chakras?

swift shore Apr 2, 2026, 10:18 AM

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faint light Have written more on chakras?

https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1489184577951109311