Sonnet I need help due TODAY!! | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 2:28 AM

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This is all I got written down
My Mom is like the sun even in the dark days
She cooks with love its like wearing a perfect glove
Her meals feels heart warming a very true gift
My mom is a light that shines when I need a guide
“A michelin star isn’t easy to get”

ancient timber Apr 6, 2025, 3:08 AM

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@dark turret For the iambic pentameter taught to you, is it the strict pentameter or a loose one? -- do you have to count the stressors?

And does your quatrains and couplet have to be rhyming?

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 3:09 AM

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ancient timber <@1194776740829089914> For the iambic pentameter taught to you, is it the strict...

Look at the photo that’s what my teacher said

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Its for 9th grade

ancient timber Apr 6, 2025, 3:10 AM

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Okie dokies

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Your first line has the wrong number of syllables

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Theres a count of 12

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 3:11 AM

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I am very bad at it

ancient timber Apr 6, 2025, 3:11 AM

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OOPS i saw the mistake

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Syllables are not words

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They're sounds

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My
Mom
Is
Like
The
Sun
E
Ven
In
The
Dark
Days

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Can you try to write 14 lines of writing

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Then i'll tweak it with you

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 3:14 AM

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I can barely do one 😭

ancient timber Apr 6, 2025, 3:14 AM

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I SEE! 🤣

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What do you want to write about

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 3:17 AM

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Anything

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Just don’t ai it

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my teacher will know

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I wanna do it about my mom if you can if it’s not to late

mint helmBOT Apr 6, 2025, 3:22 AM

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*I wanna do it

about my mom if you can

if it’s not to late*

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 3:22 AM

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It’s due Sunday

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Idk if you live in a different country or not

ancient timber Apr 6, 2025, 3:26 AM

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dark turret Just don’t ai it

I dont AI poetry.

ancient timber Apr 6, 2025, 3:26 AM

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dark turret I wanna do it about my mom if you can if it’s not to late

Its not if I can

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Its if you can

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Cause idk about your mum

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So u gotta write it urself

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 3:27 AM

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Okay thanks

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I just wanted to say my mom cooks very good and means a lot to me

ancient timber Apr 6, 2025, 3:30 AM

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Okay!

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So how about this

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stanza 1: describes mum
Stanza 2: displays her cooking
Stanza 3 (volta): shes growing old
Stanza 4: spend time with her

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 3:32 AM

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Just do it the way my teacher wants it

unique irisBOT Apr 6, 2025, 3:32 AM

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dark turret Just do it the way my teacher wants it

Wonderful! @dark turret has just pregressed to level 1!

ancient timber Apr 6, 2025, 3:33 AM

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dark turret Just do it the way my teacher wants it

You know I can't write the poetry on your behalf right

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 3:35 AM

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ancient timber You know I can't write the poetry on your behalf right

What you mean

ancient timber Apr 6, 2025, 3:35 AM

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Me cannot write poem for you

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SobbinTheLanaDelReyOut

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 3:36 AM

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I just can’t write

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Idk how

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Like I am so bad

ancient timber Apr 6, 2025, 3:36 AM

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There are some expert sonnet writers here

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Like @upper crow

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 3:36 AM

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can they chat here

ancient timber Apr 6, 2025, 3:36 AM

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Maybe he can help you better than me!

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 3:37 AM

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Okay thx

upper crow Apr 6, 2025, 3:30 PM

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Hi
I could probably try to help. The problem is that I write Voltaic Sonnets (I made it) with free meter apposed to iambic pentameter because I suck at it
Maybe @rose trellis

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When it says Iambic pentameter does it mean actual iambic pentameter or just 10 syllables?

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 6:43 PM

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upper crow When it says Iambic pentameter does it mean actual iambic pentameter or just 10 ...

10 syllables

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It’s due today

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Sonnet I need help due TODAY!!

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@rose trellis

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I’m cooked 😭

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 8:05 PM

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Can
Someone please help 😭

rose trellis Apr 6, 2025, 9:41 PM

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dark turret Can Someone please help 😭

Does turnitin work for discord posts as well?

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 9:41 PM

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rose trellis Does turnitin work for discord posts as well?

Idk

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Were are the sonnets at

rose trellis Apr 6, 2025, 9:42 PM

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there's a pattern you have to see

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with the lines

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ngl. i don't know what is allusion and connotative

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 9:46 PM

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rose trellis ngl. i don't know what is allusion and connotative

Allusion: Reference someone or something famous

Connotation: Think of a word that has a slang meaning

rose trellis Apr 6, 2025, 9:48 PM

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idk all abt that man

dark turret Apr 6, 2025, 9:50 PM

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Bro I am cooked

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I got a 89% in Ela

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So I need to do a sonnet but I am very bad at it

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😭

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Can anyone make me a sonnet

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About anything

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At this point

#Sonnet I need help due TODAY!!