#My temple

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gray rover
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My temple is where there is no inequality
Everyone chants together in a choir like melody, reciting our prayers
Wishing our lord hears it all
What bugs me is not the loud recitals,
As we each wait for our turns in lines
It's the inequality and racism right after we step outside
My temple united everyone
But the steps to it are filled with dread
Each here present is full of life and spiritually happy-for a moment
All worries and lies-disappearing
But everyone here is either a
Selfish soul or a lying cheater
I think they like it, to pretend to be nice, donating to people in need
And then stepping on them when they need to climb their ladders
They respect beliefs but they disrespect them because they're not from the same religion
They idealise equality and respect until the ideal will need their help to become a reality

We're all people of the god
Yet we've failed to unite as one

rose torrent
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It's beautiful

north iron
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Great idea, it's beautiful.

gray rover
gray rover
hot flame
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Straight and bitter as it’s supposed to be.

In god’s house
we tremble with fear,
ask for forgiveness
Pray for others
A step out of door
We become pharaoh ourselves.

north iron
gray rover
gray rover
north iron
hot flame
gray rover
severe hazel
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Poem reminds me of every time I have visited those religious places only to find greed, bitterness and entitlement instead of devotion, serenity & excitement...

It could use some more polishing, but a sweet simple one regardless. Well done!