#The Sound Of Crows.
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@vague frost
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@rustic socket @sour canopy
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@grizzled loom
SHE TAGGED ME VAMOOOOSSS!!!
CROW W WE LOVE CORVIDS this poems message and rhythm is a lovely bounce between sad hopelessness! Loved it!!
Hm...this is a pretty interesting piece, a bit hard to interpret but interesting all the same, it feels a bit like a puzzle....I am guessing the crows symbolize failure and the singing birds symbolize success or something to that effect
I love the last stanza, it seriously plays with my mind a lot I am still trying to figure out the symbolism
This might be my favourite poem of yours mysteec
@rustic socket is now following @pseudo tusk.
Man this is good. crows symbolize death but at dawn is like an awakening. Then slumber, mourning. It's really good, the wordplay. High velocity (their echoes) is like a pitched shriek. But again 'puzzling my slumber with animosity" its giving a living nightmare
Haha I adore you
Spiraling day-dreams, and spiraling in the sky; animosity read as from crows, or from the dreamer, and Anima is soul in Greek, slotting itself into that death-rebirth puzzle
Thank you Fractal!, I’m happy that you understood the depth of the Crow’s melodies. 👌❤️🩹🌟
Thank you so much for reading and thank you for your input!. I’m glad you loved it so!❤️🩹❤️🩹🥀🌟
Amazing input
Thanks for reading!!
Ah thanks guys!. I love the different ways you guys see this poem!✨❤️🩹
@tiny sail @vestal mason
@bleak marsh
@torpid ridge @magic stream
@main grail
@karmic sequoia @random torrent @carmine timber
@torpid ridge @tough path @weary spindle @zinc mural
@tawny patio @velvet bobcat
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My pen name 🔥
Barry Whitmore
Bonita Watita
LMAO
Puzzling puzzles everywhere
One day, the name shall be known
For now
tis but a mystery
And will that day, perhaps, be also judgement day?
What did you think Lee??
Are you a god?
Nope
Oh well, one day...
You think too highly of me
Before then I pray
Biscuit Wars
Brand new Wii sport
Beautifully put!, you make me sound smarter than I actually am.. 🥀❤️🩹🌟
But that is indeed the vibe that I came to deliver.
How are you guys understanding this so well?.
You understand my words better than myself.
Animosity and velocity are great word choices
Aaaah thank you Rosey ❤️🩹🫡
I'm guessing breathing willows as your pen name
It’s ( removed text)
Love that
Thank you :D.
Your kindness means a lot- all of you
It goes a long way, so thank you..
Ah ❤️🩹❤️🩹
I was asked to speak at a close friends funeral by his wife. When i got up i simply said the word “abundance” and walked back to my seat. Everyone was confused but his wife was crying, and later thanked me saying “that really means a lot”
i had a character that represented existential dread, and the way you knew he was coming was by a singular crow that would fly overhead. i really like this poem and the metaphor you used!! a lot of stuff is packed into only 4 stanzas, and that’s awesome. an amazing poem as alwayssss! :3 💜
I mean, hey- small words mean a lot 😅 even if unintentional
So does making someone smile 🌟
I adore you ❤️🩹🌟🔥
Thank you <3.
Haha I love how you rhymed that
i didn’t even mean to bruh💀 but let’s pretend i did 
Its a joke mysteec
Right right
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@solar plaza
Ok so when i get from this poem is death and mourning mixed with confusion and agitation about death? and no singing bird here is like no friend to console ur grieving hours? so what im getting in the 3rd stanza is that these crows not only agitate u but they haunt u in ur sleep? or is this about ur mental state?