#She's Not, But...

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mental delta
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She's not my life
Not my heart
Not that for which I strive

She's not my world
Not my first pick
But from her wide eyes, I cannot hide

She's not my first lust
Nor my last
But our heartbeats synced up way too fast
She's just fun like that
Her flaming soul leaves sweet marks
Warmth I feel in my spine, in my heart

But I can see the future
Together burning
I know the creature
I'm becoming to get there

He's a fire
Just like her
Ambitious, lively
And he's unafraid, unfair
Perfectly aware
When she's unaware

He's the endless forest
She can never burn to the ground
Unending fuel for her flame
And he'll ignite into the same blaze

He's the ocean
That can drown her out
The water that can put her pyre to shame
He'll limit her inferno to the lands they can claim

He's everything he needs to be
To keep her for eternity
Easily

But is he... me?

grand stag
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If it's just the first haft, I would really thought it was a love poem... tbh I kinda like cause I can relate to some parts of the poem and other reasons...

mental delta
grand stag
# mental delta Oooh? Go on (if you wanna)

The other reasons? If so... One of the reasons is that I feel I like it, I just felt that I like so I like(nothing much here in this reply... Can't really provide much feedback

mental delta
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XD fair, well thank you!

grand stag
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wc

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Keep up bro

elder wagon
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Am I too dumb or is the first parts a little about love

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Really lover the words related to fire

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OH I THINK I GET İt. Is it about seeing a future for yourself, a possibility you might find interesting. But the interest isn’t enough to justify the outcomes distance to your current self?

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Or smth like that…

mental delta
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It's less love and more lust. Real love ime/imo is when she is my world, life, heart, whatever. But the girl in question... isn't. I just like her, she's fun, she's warm, but she doesn't deserve the world. I've known other girls who I think do deserve the world

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And maybe that's better. Idk yet. Maybe its more realistic this way.

elder wagon
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Oh when you said ir wasnt a love poem I tried to think of everything but love/lust.

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I get it tho

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I mean mow