September 19

[winged quartz]

September 19
- By HY Semantic

Your poet,
Here; My beloved poets and readers;

@leaden swift
@mystic sonnet
@tranquil ingot
@mellow juniper

Hope you all enjoy!

@next grotto

[mellow juniper]

Mirus didn't tag

[winged quartz]

Ah did!

[tranquil ingot]

Mmmm delicious

[winged quartz]

@bleak salmon

[bleak salmon]

Please give me texted version. I cannot download file

[winged quartz]

A screenshot?

[bleak salmon]

👍🏻

[mystic sonnet]

Omgg I read it...i feel like i need to read the myth of adonis to appreciate it more.. but enemies to lover type stuff🤨 please don't be like other story writers and leave it without the conclusion now😔

Love how you called her dress armor...and the ending(last stanza was definitely not expected) by me atleast

[winged quartz]

This is just part 1, you will know more about Adonis!!! In the next one, 💗

@bold goblet

[winged quartz]

@grim talon

[grim talon]

Hmm?

[winged quartz]

Do you remember me? Sharnalt?

[grim talon]

Depends. 🌚

[winged quartz]

What do you mean depends?

[grim talon]

Depends on if I liked you or not.

[grim talon]

It should be ’tis.

Hmm, nice.

I like it.

Really.

WHEN THE PART 2

Me wanna read 😭😭

[winged quartz]

YOU DARE NOT TO LIKE ME HUH?

[winged quartz]

Alrighty thanksss

[winged quartz]

Idk

[winged quartz]

THAT AIN'T HAPPENING NAHHH

[grim talon]

Do I know you?

[leaden swift]

HAHAHAHAHA

[winged quartz]

Bro

[winged quartz]

POETICA SPOTTED

[grim talon]

Hmm, how may I help you, stranger lady?

[winged quartz]

Bye

[grim talon]

Farwell, may the gods bless you.

[winged quartz]

Not fair

[grim talon]

Oh well, why are you against this unfairness? You greet me, I greet you kinder. You depart, and I wish blessings be on you.

[winged quartz]

Alright. If you say so, and continue treating your dearest friend as a stranger, be ready to face the consequences.

Regards,
Sello.

[grim talon]

Ah, dear ma'am, my incompatibility with you has seriously maimed the general bond humans share. And with livid colours I must, in the lieu, confess the first instance of this to be a mere folly of laughs. Henceforth, I have made a severe and continuous lapse in the repayment of that opinion. But, since the world is great and my heart greater, I shall take the guilt of it and march into the night a free and calm man and leave you with my kindest regards. For that is the extent I can provide to a mere stranger. And if I must face the consequences of that aggrandized sense, I might but with a just rage and a stout face.

Kind regards,
Solyn. A stranger.

[winged quartz]

You won't look great with that look lmao

[grim talon]

Ah, dear madam, kindly refrain from making comments on a stranger's looks.

Kind Regards,
Solyn, a stranger.

[winged quartz]

Alright, mister;

[winged quartz]

@swift mesa

[next grotto]

This is beautifully done. I love how the piece subtly and ever so carefully adds a gentle touch of risqué without being overly at the same time. It keeps the reader hanging on for more details on what should come next. 💜

[winged quartz]

Reading Mirus comments makes me really happy, love you a lotte

[winged quartz]

@edgy swallow

[edgy swallow]

This poem, September 19 strikes a delicate balance between flamboyant passion and tender irony, where images collide like bursts of color in a midnight sky
I’m particularly moved by lines like,

“She, in a white dress shirt with suspenders, wore a leather apron”
Which evoke an arresting blend of classic allure and modern audacity
The playful invocation,
“Adonis help, Adonis here, Adonis here, Adonis, Adonis…!”
This one, rings out as both a comic relief and a poignant nod to timeless desire, its echoes mingling with the soft admonition of “Can you shut it, honey?” in a way that feels both familiar and daring
Each scattered rhyme and rhythmic shift carries an emotional cadence, drawing the reader from the ethereal heights of a “wine-red lips” declaration to the unexpected twists of a “deafening silence” and the fiery spark of “BOOM! Let’s ignite the journey, loves <33”

Your words, your poem creates a landscape where vulnerability dances with irreverence, leaving us with a lingering taste of bittersweet intimacy and a promise of more untamed tales to come
Well Written 🍻

[winged quartz]

WOW, I LOVE YOUR VOCABULARY

Honestly, it's so impressive! And thanks a lot for the time <33

[edgy swallow]

Took me like 5 mins, no worries!

[winged quartz]

@fiery yew

[fiery yew]

I am just going to say i was not expecting this but that it is very well written ^^ great poem bonus points for using ulysses best app

[winged quartz]

Not expecting it?

Thanksss

[winged quartz]

@dense needle Imma tag you too, this one is an experimental piece again

[dense needle]

ohh september 19 that's my mom's and younger's brother Birthday

intresting

title

[winged quartz]

Oh wow!

@opal folio

[dense needle]

did i just witnessed a top-notch story telling

Classic countenance, a pure chef’s kiss, for her wine-red lips

my fav line there were better lines then this . idk it just stucked with me

the ending was fire with that cliffhanger ( i hate cliffhanger ) .

[winged quartz]

nooo side eyes lol

[dense needle]

the piece was gentle and i loved it .

[dense needle]

CLIFFFHANGER

[winged quartz]

Thankkk youuu!!! And you cooked that poem... No more para would be enough to say

[short flame]

*Thankkk youuu!!! And you cooked

that poem... No more para would

be enough to say*

- Perfect Selloquin

[dense needle]

thanx for highlighting

[opal folio]

what exactly is this?

i'm confused

it seems different from the rest

and what exactly is "the voice" ?

as for the good, the flow is very good

the poem itself has a sensual background to it which i believe is the intention

[winged quartz]

It's part 1 and you will know about the voice in the upcoming ones

[short flame]

*It's part 1 and you

will know about the voice in

the upcoming ones*

- Perfect Selloquin

[winged quartz]

(it's me, the writer, speaking with you all)

[opal folio]

i see

[winged quartz]

@sturdy fox

(One experimental piece)

[sturdy fox]

Let me say its not just a poem
I could literally feel as if a movie or a musical was going on and narrater was hinting me what to expect next.
From the imagery to the dialogues i liked it all, specially the part “Adonis help, Adonis here, Adonis here, Adonis, Adonis…!”

Personal opinion:-
you could write something a little more serious then Boom honey while narrating lol but it made it more hilarious so it’s your own creation

well penned 🖊

[winged quartz]

DON'T MAKE ME CRY... I WANTED IT TO BE CINEMATIC 😭 love you mannnn

[winged quartz]

Lol alrightz,

Thank you zeeee

[winged quartz]

@dapper saffron it may not meet your expectations, but go on

[dapper saffron]

come on i believe in you
the file aint opening rn, i'll check it out soon

[winged quartz]

alrightyy

[winged quartz]

@mellow juniper this is the one... Experiment

[mellow juniper]

Ohhh yes look I knew I read it, it just disappeared one day