Beginning a line with “And” is not usually common, if you tried to combine it into one phrase such as “Her words cut your skin drawing every last drop, and her plea begs to heal all that she stole” I think the it would flow better
#souls, scars, stains
fresh wave
The very first couple lines create an internal conflict : “her stare holds a thousand words” … yet she also “swallows every stare” ? It’s also a bit of rhyming fatigue as you are rhyming the exact same word .. I’m being extremely nitpicky I’m sorry but those are just my thoughts
shell merlin
Beginning a line with “And” is not usually common, if you tried to combine it in...
Thankyouu!!
shell merlin
The very first couple lines create an internal conflict : “her stare holds a tho...
No I hated that part you're not wrong I'll re write it!