Distant Rain

[gentle forge]

@high valley @young wharf

suprise suprise

[high valley]

You always manage to stir something inside me

But I wanna ask one thing
What was the inspo behind this one?

[gentle forge]

I revamped an old poem

this 1 is the revamp

[high valley]

I see

[grizzled oracle]

I am no level of giving feedback but I will be honest here,
I can imagine myself sitting in a apartment around a window looking outside the weather and writing for it,

1. you have written it beautifully with being connected to the nature
2. Not a feedback but a question,In the 4th stanza when you question the distant rain, i am not able to find the answer can you help me with it?

[high valley]

[gentle forge]

yea the old poem was inspired by an undertale song lol so ig thats the actual inspiration, its called, "It's raining somewhere else"

[gentle forge]

im basically jst saying that the rain is being silenced

also ty!

[high valley]

I see lol

[gentle forge]

I listened to the music and saw the title and just thought that it could be a good topic for a poem

[young wharf]

How did I not get pinged for this??

I'll read it in a second