Apple

[pliant mountain]

The forbidden glowing,
an apple glistening with appeal.
I knew its knowledge was great,
though wrong;
I wanted to taste, to steal.

“This isn’t for me.”

My mind cleared, the self-hate and fear.
“This isn’t for me.”
I walked away,
praying for forgiveness,
shedding a tear,
hoping He sees the regret in me,

His daisy swaying,
the crush of a boot
the man fell on his knees,
his soul gutted from him

the crumbling of a visage,
yet the raising of the soul
The soul flew away
it did cause a envisage
a soft man, rebuilding of hope.

Perfection isn't real, but love is.

@buoyant rampart@void pasture@full ember

@willow sinew

@crystal agate

[buoyant rampart]

Dam man, you getting better and better ngl, is that the wei effect?

@whole blade Look tallu, mad be cooking lately.

[whole blade]

Good for him. 💀

[whole blade]

Indeed.

[pliant mountain]

@placid crescent

[full ember]

Awh so cuteeeee

[pliant mountain]

@dawn yarrow

[dawn yarrow]

Ooooh I love this one

Almost teared up dammit

[placid crescent]

Deep. I love it.

[void pasture]

Oh cmon Wei effect shut up 🙄

[void pasture]

I rlly love this poem mad!! Very beautiful writing 🥹

"the crumbling of a visage, yet the raising of the soul" perfection 🙏

[dry swallow]

*"the crumbling of a

visage, yet the raising of

the soul" perfection 🙏*

- latolii

[pliant mountain]

Thank you Cori !

[buoyant rampart]

You shut up kid

[void pasture]

No you shut up Aladdin

[buoyant rampart]

No you shut up, uh wait I'm Aladdin? Nah that's fire, I accept

[dry swallow]

*No you shut up, uh

wait I'm Aladdin? Nah that's

fire, I accept*

- whatamidoing6758

[void pasture]

Okay habibi 🙄

[buoyant rampart]

Tq tq

[void pasture]

Tq? 😭

[buoyant rampart]

Thank you

T q

[void pasture]

Ooo okay okay 😒

[buoyant rampart]

What did ya think weirdo

[void pasture]

Tq is very used texting in Hispanic countries as "I love you" but like platonically too

[pliant mountain]

YALL FIGHTING IN MY POEM ?

[void pasture]

HAHAHAHA SORRY

🙇‍♀️

[pliant mountain]

lol its funny

[buoyant rampart]

Huh crazy

[pliant mountain]

not tq

[void pasture]

We're doing you a favour by making it recent again 😉

[buoyant rampart]

everything is my battle field

[pliant mountain]

this is one of my worst things so lol

[void pasture]

And so everywhere you lose

[pliant mountain]

more of a prose then a poem

[buoyant rampart]

Yet I win the war

[buoyant rampart]

It's cool nonetheless

[void pasture]

Rlly??? I like this one so much

[buoyant rampart]

I saw that mad

[buoyant rampart]

Lier

[void pasture]

Only in your dreams

[pliant mountain]

oh your so sweet, ( i have said that 3 times in my life )

[buoyant rampart]

At least I'm winning, you don't win in reality or dream

[void pasture]

Aww what an honour I feel flattered 🫡

[pliant mountain]

color

[void pasture]

Gray

[pliant mountain]

No you spell words wrong

🇺🇸

[void pasture]

I grew up in "British" school 🙄 America is the one spelling it wrong

[pliant mountain]

i grew up in dirt, so im right prob

[pliant mountain]

@brave burrow

[pliant mountain]

@delicate bough

[pliant mountain]

@autumn valve

[autumn valve]

This poem's so soothing to read♡´･ᴗ･`♡. The theme isn't all innocent but it leaves with a lingering feeling of warmth.

[pliant mountain]

nope it isnt I admit, but its a rebuilding of hope for me

[autumn valve]

Yeah, resilience doesn't come from sitting pretty, it comes from hardships. Doesn't matter if it's innocent or not, what matters is that you came out stronger than ever!:D

[pliant mountain]

this is a faith based peom about me trying to not commit sin, im walking into the garden of eden trying to not eat apple

[dry swallow]

*this is a faith based

peom about me trying

to not commit sin*

- mad1191

[pliant mountain]

"he" is god himself

" his" tulip

gods tulip

[pliant mountain]

@summer siren

[willow sinew]

I knew that because of the capital letters and because it's your piece. Beautiful poem about abnegation, faith and hope of inner peace ✌️
Btw, I would love to see a poem of you with more rhymes, maybe it could improve your musicality and the impact of your poetry ?

[pliant mountain]

@brittle furnace

[pliant mountain]

@barren latch

[barren latch]

I really like the vocabulary here

[pliant mountain]

@uneven owl

[uneven owl]

"Perfection isn't real but love is"
Indeed my friend ✨

[pliant mountain]

It’s as close to a love poem I’ll get

[pliant mountain]

@snow sequoia l

[pliant mountain]

@ebon dock

[pliant mountain]

THANKS ROSEY

[pliant mountain]

@median cipher

[light scroll]

[light scroll]

Someone never pinged me in this one

Hahahah

[pliant mountain]

@crystal agate

[crystal agate]

this reminds me of the story of Adam and eve..and that i should ask for forgiveness because god is merciful..despite the flaws of human beings he loves them and gives them a chance...the line where you say "This isn't for me." this is so powerful..we know that those temptations jusk like that apple are not for us yet we go towards them but the man in this poem stops himself and asks for forgiveness.that is a powerful thing and a great quality....the raising of the soul is like a new beginning that he got after asking for forgiveness..his outer shell that was a lie crumbled and only a pure soul is left...

this poem is so beautiful

❤️

[pliant mountain]

we are attracted to fire even though it burns

Thank you cherry