#A poet's reckoning

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mossy crow
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She said my words fit her like shadows in the dusk,
Soft, heavy, where sorrow dares to trust.
Yet she wonders - if these lines I weave and bend.
Are signs of a heart too broken to mend.

But oh- how sweet the ache I now hold,
As if misery's finger have turn me gold.
No longer chasing the ghost of her face,
I craft from wounds time cannot erase.

I do not fester - I burn, I glean,
A heart that bleeds is a heart that dreams.
And if pain is the price for words that stay,
Let it carve me deeper, day by day.

For love has touched me - - then turned aside,
Left me to drown in the ebbing tide.
yet here I stand, not lost, not blind,
A poet of soul-not just a mind.

So let her fear for what she cannot see-
I have not broken-I have set myself free.

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elfin solstice
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Fancy

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Itll be an interesting tweak if you could play with the syntax and structure more!

Lineation could be varried! SHOW ME YOUR RECKONING! I wanna feel it, see it, consume it!

Turn your words into imagery! "Carve me deeper" -> "Carve stills into barked shoulders, acclaiming my say"

mossy crow
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I missed a line

elfin solstice
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Its a pretty symphonic poem!

mossy crow
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read once again please if it makes more sense now

elfin solstice
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18 lines is very interesting!

elfin solstice
mossy crow
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