#Pizza (Sonnet #15)

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runic nova
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***Sonnet - Pizza

I'm craving pizza and I've got a phone
I opened Ubereats to order food
I bought a pizza, just for me alone
With cheese and pepperoni all too good.

I sat so bored just waiting on my couch
My tummy screams deprived of pizza meat
I hear my doorbell ring while i am slouched
The boxes filled, i cannot wait to eat.

My tongue is dancing eating pizza warm
The meaty pastry with pineapple chunks
I'm 'bout to do my tummy major harm
I'll eat the pizza with the sauces dunked.

Unstoppable i am at munching all
And now im filled to max while nature calls.***

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Pizza (Sonnet #15)

slender skiff
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Lmao, nice. Good, light verse about pizza. Well done 🍕. One correction: "I hear my doorbell rang" should be "I hear my doorbell ring".

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Also, the line "I'm 'bout to do my tummy filled with harm" doesn't quite make sense. You could change it to something like "I'm 'bout to do my tummy major harm".

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