#A fallen star

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undone vigil
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Another chance, another day,
Another time to lose my way.
I try to stand, but still I fall,
Like yesterday. I’ve seen it all.

No place to run, no place to hide,
Trouble finds me, deep inside.
Guilt and sorrow weigh me down,
They whisper lies, they pull, they drown.

I hope you get the pain I gain,
The fire I hold, the cross I wear.
I hear the man…his words, his fight,
His heart is fine, but lost in the night.

My heart is fine, but chaos reigns,
A tangled web inside My brain.
I understand, yet don’t know why,
A home exchanged for streets that cry.

Never break the ones who care,
For karma waits it won’t play fair.
No sorry said can heal the past,
Regret runs deep, it holds you fast.

He quit, let go of all he knew,
His strength ran dry, his heart withdrew.
The weight too much, the road too far,
A soul that fades,a fallen star.

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A fallen star

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<@&1145760802666717234> @compact trellis
@main steeple
@civic ore

civic ore
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I like the rythem in this! If you write poems that ryhme always hit me up!

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Good job!

rocky flume
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I like the rhythm here too, AABB I suppose, whats the meaning of the 4th stanza btw?

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A home exchanged for streets that cry

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Can't really grasp the meaning😭

undone vigil
rocky flume
rocky flume
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Let me read your other poem

rocky flume